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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Beyond Vietnam: The Outside Lands & Journeyman

2/5/2016

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I’m pleased to recommend two California-set novels published this week about the fragility of masculinity, sibling loyalty and the impact on families of the Vietnam war, the first for the generation directly affected and the second for the children of men who served.

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Jeannie is nineteen in 1963 when her mother steps out into traffic without looking and is killed. Despite her father’s expectations she’ll be the stabilising female presence in the home, Jeannie watches helplessly as her younger brother Kip goes off the rails. Jeannie is more quietly adrift, abandoning her secretarial course for a waitressing job at a burger bar, her first sexual experience results in pregnancy. With wooden smiles, the upper-class Harpers welcome her into their clan. When Kip decides to join the Marines, Jeannie is too preoccupied with new motherhood, as well as an infatuation with schoolgirl anti-war activist Lee, to dissuade him. Immature, and temperamentally unsuited to the military life, Kip is shipped to Vietnam, where a rash action lands him in the slammer. In her efforts to save him, Jeannie puts her marriage, her child and her own integrity at risk.

I knew I was going to like this novel from the opening line (p3):

Every year, after Kip had blown the flames from his cake, their mom told the story of how he’d nearly killed her.

The question was, how much? Impressively, Hannah Kohler maintains this exquisite use of language right to the end. But beautiful writing can distract almost as much as sloppy writing and, at first, it seemed to distance me from the characters more than I would like. I was further thrown when a third point of view character, in addition to Jeannie and Kip, took up the story about two thirds of the way through. But I finally came to the conclusion that the psychic distance was an inevitable consequence of the multi-layered and complex (but never confusing) story that gripped me progressively more with each page.

The Outside Lands is a powerful debut about the human fallout of misguided meddling in faraway lands. It’s about loss and betrayal and attempts at reparation and, while I can’t claim my own writing matches Hannah Kohler’s standard, like my debut novel, Sugar and Snails, the impact of life-changing decisions taken by adolescent minds. As with Armadillos, this is a British novel taking on the voice of America with gusto. As with Everyone Brave, I’m looking forward to seeing how many literary prizes this compassionate war story will accrue.

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After witnessing a colleague accidentally set fire to himself on a Las Vegas building site, thirty-something Nolan Jackson decides it’s time to move on. As a carpenter, he can find work anywhere and the caravan he’s lovingly refurbished is the only home he’s needed for thirteen years. Stopping off to visit his mother on the way to the coast, he learns of his elder brother’s fragility following his divorce and agrees to check up on him. When Nolan loses all his possessions in another tragic accident, he’s forced to stick around, bedding down in his brother’s garage and finding employment with a contractor stripping down and rebuilding a luxury home.

Like its protagonist, Journeyman is a quiet novel with unexpected depths about morality and modern masculinity. His need for control in a turbulent world is poignantly encompassed in the passage where he shows the reader around his trailer (p34):

He sits comfortably surrounded by his possessions. He knows they travel well and can be readily found when needed, for he’s arranged his belongings carefully. For nearly half his life Nolan’s worked to fashion order in the world. He’s cut and joined rock, metal, plastic, wire, and wood, and still mastery eludes him. Still it wills away, and what he works something into, chance and time undo elegantly and infinitely, beyond his ken of patience and perception, everything new commencing towards unravel and decay.

There’s a strong parallel between Nolan’s work and the potentially more challenging task of restoring the foundations of a meaningful life, one that doesn’t up sticks when things get tricky. The young man’s painful re-engagement with his emotions, exemplified in his hesitant phonecalls with the woman he left behind in Las Vegas, is contrasted with his brother’s more manic coping strategies, as well as the behaviour of the arsonist who “lights fires to clear out the understory so it can go roll back stronger” (p111), reminiscent of Sarah Butler’s novel Before the Fire. In reconnecting with his roots and with family, Nolan circles through his memories of his deceased father, a veteran of the Vietnam War, and of the traumatic event he witnessed alongside his brother at the tender age of seven. In the cohabitation of estranged brothers with very different ways of relating to the world, and explorations of the meaning of home, it reminded me of The Hilltop, a novel about the Israeli occupation.

With a lot going on for me when I read this novel, including noisy building work at the house next door, I might not have read it as closely as it deserved. If you’re interested in the themes of reparation, and what makes men tick, I think you’ll enjoy Journeyman. Thanks to Granta for my review copy.

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Norah Colvin link
4/5/2016 11:52:09 am

Thanks for sharing your reviews of both these books, Anne. They both seem to delve rather deeply into the psyche of their characters. Something I do enjoy. The difference in attitude and responses of the siblings sounds to be handled quite well. Caroline Lodge was reviewing books about sisters. You have one about a brother and a sister and one about two brothers. Siblings must be trending this week. :)

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Annecdotist
6/5/2016 07:50:39 pm

I think there’s always something to say about siblings in that mixture of rivalry and loyalty – and yes both of these novels are strong on character.

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Sarah
4/5/2016 08:59:51 pm

Interesting point that "beautiful writing can distract almost as much as sloppy writing...". That is so true. I often find myself marveling at a phrase or highlighting (if in an ebook) beautiful writing then have to get back into the story. The switch of POV that late in the book would throw me, too. Neither of these seem to get into the Vietnam war as much as the characters' reaction to it. Is that fair to say?

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Annecdotist
6/5/2016 07:57:16 pm

It feels almost enviously picky to say that good writing can get in the way (and I’m saying good as distinct from flowery overwriting which is always a pain) but it does happen as you say that you can lose your place in a story as you sit admiring. The switch of POV was quite a jolt initially but it worked well and added another level to the story.
As to your question, it’s a bit tricky to answer as for me any readable war story would be viewed through the characters’ eyes. The Outside Lines does show Kip out in Vietnam so that’s quite warish for me, and it can’t not affect the folks at home. Journeymen is a bit different because its focus is on the next generation and I might not have flagged it as about Vietnam (though it is) if it hadn’t fitted so neatly with the other! Hope that’s not too garbled a reply.

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