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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
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“I was all right till I got to the nuns!”

5/2/2018

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These words could well have come from Matty, the main character of my WIP, Matilda Windsor Is Coming Home, but they actually belong to Mr A (as does this photo of nuns picnicking in the Forum in Rome). He knew of my character’s tragedy when he agreed to proofread my latest version in readiness to go to beta readers, but didn’t feel its emotional punch until towards the end. I’d better not give away my story’s secrets, but here’s how – at present – that scene is introduced:
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You could say the nuns provided for fallen women out of charity. Or you could say the saints needed sinners more than sinners needed saints. Our labour was the lifeblood of the convent, our toil enabling the sisters’ leisurely life of prayer. Their virtue sparkled against the backdrop of our depravity, their estrangement from society less painful when set against our own.

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For that part of the story, I drew on my general knowledge of the Magdalene laundries, a type of forced labour camp for unmarried mothers run by nuns. When I followed this up more recently (my back-to-front research method being to create first and fact-check later) with the book on which the film Philomena is based, I was shocked that, even into the twenty-first century, lies were told to keep mothers and their children apart.


I have to go further back in history for a less tragic version of convent life. I was enthralled by Sarah Dunant’s religious community in Renaissance Italy in which one woman’s deprivation could be another’s salvation. Although set in an earlier period, this helped create the setting of my short story
The Invention of Harmony.
 
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Charli has written about nuns this week, although the actual prompt is wider: to create a 99-word story
featuring something black and white. Although the nuns in my images are blue, I think I’ve managed to meet the challenge:


Black and white choice?


My father’s gaze swept the ranks of spines. “You’ll have to give these up when you marry.”

I searched his face for signs of jocularity. Finding none, sweat gathered in my palms. “I cannot live without my books.”

“I’ve done you a disservice, daughter. Men don’t want an educated wife.”

“Then I shall not marry.”

“If only that were possible. But, when I die, you’ll lose both my protection and my wealth. You have no choice.”

I plucked a book from the shelf. Hildegard von Bingen’s Physica. “There’s another option.”

“Caged in a convent?”

“Where female minds run free.”


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Norah Colvin link
6/2/2018 10:42:15 am

I'm not sure if I was all right until I got to the nuns, but they certainly didn't help improve things. :) Therefore, I love your title and am in total agreement with Mr A. :)
Your paragraph about the saints needing the sinners more than the other way round is very telling. I was just a little ahead of the revolution that freed women sexually, if indeed that's what it did. I knew quite a few girls who did their time in those laundries and never got to see or hold their babies. It's not that long ago, even here. So much sadness. It never ceases to amaze me how quickly society's attitudes changed on that. From incarceration and shame to acceptance and payment. The burden those women had to bear was almost unbearable - excruciatingly so for them. I saw the movie Philomena with Judy Dench - heart rending. I thought I remembered your story the Invention of Harmony but had a peek, just to be sure. I just shake my head - at the tale, not the telling.
I like the way you went with your flash. I'm not sure that minds run free in the convent, but it's a nice thought. You paint a prettier picture than I did. The situation seems so real to me, I just want to shake some sense into them. "No man wants an educated wife". At least that attitude is changing, if slowly. So much story in so few words. You've done it again, Anne. Well done.

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Annecdotist
6/2/2018 01:44:26 pm

For me too the nuns were merely part of the general climate of fear, but that would have been nice if they could have set an example of kindly behaviour. The head of my infant school was actually okay but the head of my junior school (7 to 11) was a nasty piece of work.
Gosh, that you knew people who suffered the Magdalen laundries brings it so much closer. I never heard of such things as I was growing up (“had to get married” was shameful enough and I didn’t even think what would happen if that option fell through) but I wonder now if I’d have known people enslaved there myself. Although it could be that England was a little ahead of Australia (and of course definitely Ireland) in becoming more secular. I agree, it’s amazing – and wonderful – how attitudes have changed so much in a relatively short space of time. Although my novel finishes in 1991, I hope I’ve captured some of that cultural change.
I was very impressed with the film Philomena. I wonder if you also saw Oranges and Sunshine about a social worker (who happens to be local to me – not that I can claim any credit) uncovering the scandal of children shipped to Australia without their parents’ knowledge or consent and subsequently abused.
Sorry if it wasn’t clear but I didn’t think of my flash having a contemporary setting. I was harking back to a time when women’s choices were a lot more limited and marriage could be a form of rape and wives continually risked their lives and sanity with repeated childbirth. For some, the convent would provide a genuine sanctuary and space for intellectual development. Plus not having to go out! What’s not to like?

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Charli Mills
7/2/2018 12:51:43 am

Well, Anne, you certainly gave the prompt a thorough vetting. I'm not yet to all of Matty's secrets, so I'm glad you didn't reveal any! I'm savoring her story, though it is the story of many and how they all come to be part of her homecoming. I'm enthralled! As for nuns in history, such an interesting juxtaposition to compare their societal estrangement with that of the "sinners." I had read the NYT's story The Lost Children of Taum (https://www.nytimes.com/interactive/2017/10/28/world/europe/tuam-ireland-babies-children.html). It's captivating and yet so terribly unjust and sad. Plenty of high-spirited and intelligent women sought other options than marriage, but that didn't mean they got to pursue those options. I think even today, strong women are looked upon as troublesome. The way the pendulum is swinging in the US, I often fear that the progress women have made is eroding. Great reviews, too!

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Annecdotist
9/2/2018 02:53:17 pm

Thanks, Charli, you can see why I was keen on this prompt. Oh, yes, I’d forgotten about Taum – another scandalous cover-up! We’re marking 100 years of votes for women (women over thirty with property, that is) in the UK at the moment but always worth remembering the pendulum can swing the other way.

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Robbie Cheadle
9/2/2018 03:53:39 pm

A really nice response to the prompt, Anne. I am not sure how much reading time nuns got though.

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Annecdotist
9/2/2018 04:51:53 pm

Ha, they might if they get other women to do the heavy work!

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