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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Love torn asunder: Where The River Parts by Radhika Swarup

17/2/2016

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Punjab in 1947, and Asha and her best friend, Nargis, are seventeen and still at school. Although Asha is a Hindu and Nargis Muslim, religious differences cannot sour their friendship, nor the goodwill between their families living in neighbouring houses in a comfortable part of town. The girls take part in each other’s traditions, such as fasting alongside the older women to safeguard their future husbands’ well-being. Unusually in a culture in which marriages are usually arranged by the parents, Asha has already chosen her husband in the form of her friend’s older brother, Firoze. What could possibly come between them? Firoze likes her, and her parents like Firoze; in fact, he’s her beloved father’s protégé in his law firm.
Yet as August approaches, and the country prepares for not only the longed-for independence from the British Empire, but Partition and the creation of the new state of Pakistan, life becomes increasingly risky for Hindus in that part of the country. The viability of a union with the man she loves is the least of Asha’s problems, as she realises that her family has left it far too late to safely abandon their home. Asha survives the carnage and makes a new life in Delhi with a man who treats her well, although she never forgets her first love. Fifty years later, when her granddaughter falls in love with a Pakistani in New York, Asha gets a second chance with Firoze. Can they salvage their relationship from the wreckage of the damage wrought on their compatriots, or are their differences too wide to bridge?

As with any successful historical novel, Where the River Parts reflects not only the big events, but the preoccupations of ordinary life, particularly in the vanity and superficiality of the girls as Asha helps Nargis prepare her trousseau. Tension is increased through the reader’s knowledge of the calamity waiting around the corner which the characters continually play down, reminding me of Naomi Alderman’s quote about Jewishness.

However, being already familiar with the history, I’d have liked it to delve a bit deeper. Although, contradictory as ever, I’m prone to complaining about an overdose of horror, I felt this author was a little overprotective of the reader, particularly in that the characters we get close to are overwhelmingly decent chaps, distancing us from the violence in which another writer might make us feel complicit.

Congratulations Radhika Swarup on a very readable debut novel, and thanks to Sandstone Press for my review copy. Do follow the other stopping-off points on the blog tour check out what other readers have to say.

Like the Holocaust, like the Armenian genocide addressed in another novel by the same publisher, like Rwanda and the former Yugoslavia, and the American Civil War, the capacity for neighbour to turn against neighbour is a frightening one that’s hard for us to get our heads round. While the non-fiction book The Social Brain successfully persuades me that cooperation around diversity is part of our make-up, I don’t think it manages to explain the circumstances which trigger a cooperative relationship breaking down. Perhaps this is still the territory of fiction. What do you think?
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Charli Mills
17/2/2016 11:03:58 pm

Being the history buff, I love the genealogy show "Finding Your Roots" with Dr. Henry Louis Gattes, Jr. He digs into all American history, including slavery and immigration from other countries. He's featured several people whose family experienced this period in time. I find it fascinating. I also love the clean and inviting look of the blog tour poster (that's the marketing buff in me)! Definitely want to read this book.

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Annecdotist
18/2/2016 06:46:29 pm

I think we have something similar over here, Charli, in which celebrities are helped to discover the skeletons in the cupboard. It's certainly a traumatic period of history, as was the later division of Pakistan into (West) Pakistan and Bangladesh which perhaps we hear less about.
Glad I've enticed you. Do let me know what you think if you get to read this one.

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geoff link
17/2/2016 11:04:30 pm

That issue about too much, too little - in this case violence - is difficult. I was chatting with someone about sanitising casual racism as it applied back in the 70s because how a modern audience might view a character.the same way maybe graphic scenes may leave the reader wondering about the writer. Is it more courageous to write with an honest brutality or to do sufficient to leave the rest to the imagination. I wonder. I have little time for anyone who 'speaks as they see it' without regard for the audience and how hurtful their 'truth' might be so I guess I feel the same in literature. But there isn't a right way.

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Annecdotist
18/2/2016 06:49:10 pm

I'm all for leaving it to readers' imagination to fill in the gaps, as long as the pointers are clear. But there's also a need for accuracy when looking back at a different point of history. A difficult one, as you say.

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Gargi link
18/2/2016 07:11:19 am

I’d agree with Geoff on this. There isn’t a middle path and I guess it boils down to individual preferences. For my part I feel jaded reading too many graphic descriptions of an event which we already know the details of and grew up learning about. I’m happy to skip these portions, but you’re right – I may feel differently later.

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Annecdotist
18/2/2016 06:52:08 pm

Yes, we differ so much as readers, which is part of the joy but also frustration. In this novel I did feel that the horror, blood and gore was portrayed at the right level, I just felt that I might have been a little more engaged if some of the point of view characters were also complicit in the carnage – after all, these were somebody's sons / fathers / brothers going on the attack.

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Norah Colvin link
18/2/2016 11:29:47 am

Interesting review, Anne. I expected a flash on diversity at the end. Maybe you posted before Charli's prompt, but this book certainly meets the criteria. I just this morning started listening to The Social Brain and am already fascinated. I think I am going to enjoy it so appreciate your review/recommendation. I'm pleased to see that you mentioned it again in this post. I am not sure I'd like too much in the way of graphic details but I think a story needs to be honest in the telling. I like the sound of this one and wish I had more reading time. Thanks for the review and the thoughts to ponder.

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Annecdotist
18/2/2016 06:54:51 pm

Unfortunately I posted this review of the day before the diversity prompt – it would indeed have been suitable. But I've got a couple more options up my sleeve, as you might well imagine!
I'm very much looking forward to your perspective on The Social Brain and I'm honoured that you were happy to follow up my recommendation.

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