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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Men looking back in sadness and anger: Celestial Bodies & Brother

12/8/2018

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Meet Abdallah, an Omani businessman who grew up without a mother, and Michael, a convenience-store worker in Toronto of Trinidadian heritage, who grew up without a dad. Each is somehow too sensitive for the community that contains them, with confusing expectations of masculinity they don’t easily meet. While Abdallah is rich in money and relatives, and Michael, alone with his mother, can hardly make ends meet, both are the products of rapidly changing cultures, both have seen violence and both have reason for regret.


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Celestial Bodies by Jokha Alharti
translated by Marilyn Booth

On a flight to Frankfurt, Abdallah, an Omani businessman, reflects on the trials of his life. The grandson of a man who made his fortune selling arms, and the only son of a man who made his from slavery, his childhood wasn’t easy. His mother having died when he was only a few weeks old, his father was extremely strict, punishing him on one occasion by leaving him hanging upside down in a well.
 
Although fortunate in being able to choose the woman he would marry, he was unaware that she’d pledged her heart to another man and, while culturally romantic love was not part of the contract, her emotional distancing pained him. But she did give him three children, although their daughter’s short-lived marriage to a man who hit her, and their younger son’s developmental difficulties, diagnosed as autism, brought further heartache.
 
While Abdallah’s sadness, expressed in a first-person narrative, seemed to me the heart of the novel, it isn’t mentioned in the blurb. This focuses instead on Abdallah’s wife, Mayya, and her two sisters whose different routes to marriage reflect the conflict between tradition and modernity in a society still shaking off its colonial past. This strand of the novel, encompassing also the girls’ parents, a former slave and the father’s Bedouin lover, unfolds in the third person interspersed with Abdallah’s chapters.
 
As with the recently reviewed
Miss Burma, my enjoyment of this novel was lessened by a distancing from the multiple characters, especially the women, despite my curiosity about the culture. It’s a pity it didn’t engage me more as I’m pretty sure this is the first Omani-set novel I’ve read. Thanks to Sandstone Press for my review copy.


Brother by David Chariandy

Growing up in an insalubrious part of Toronto, Michael, and his slightly older brother Francis, were often left alone in the flat while their mother was at work. The boys have no clear memory of their father who left when they were very young, and the rest of their relations are back in their mother’s native Trinidad. She battles poverty, the education system’s low expectations and institutional racism to bring them up to make something of themselves, but the boys know their prospects are poor.

Michael wants to emulate his streetwise brother, but lacks the style and confidence to pull off the swagger. As her firstborn, their mother also has a soft spot for Francis but, as the gap widens between his aspirations and hers for him, the tension escalates at home. Francis finds friendship, acceptance and a passion for music, with Jelly and the other men and boys who hang around the local barbershop, a place that’s often raided by police.
 
The novel is narrated by Michael, ten years on from the tragedy that cut short his brother’s life. Their mother seems to have never recovered, and Michael works a dead-end job to be close by if and when things get too much. But their dampened-down existence is disturbed by the arrival of his childhood friend, Aisha, one of the few who has managed to escape the confines of the community.
 
As Michael looks back on the history of his family, and Aisha reconnects with her roots, the reader wonders if they’re dashing towards deeper disaster, or if this will be the catalyst to moving on. David Chariandy’s second novel is a gentle story about violence: the violence of discrimination and inequality that leaves little room for manoeuvre between the extremes of apathy and rage. Thanks to Bloomsbury for my review copy.

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Charli Mills
13/8/2018 07:51:02 pm

While both books would e interesting for their cultural backgrounds, sometimes, I find the global violence of humanity too stark to want to st down and read about its impact. How the rich get rich and the poor stay poor could almost be an unending theme of humanity.

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Annecdotist
17/8/2018 02:10:04 pm

Yes, we don’t seem to learn, do we? One step forward, two steps back.

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Norah Colvin link
19/8/2018 12:00:15 pm

There are daily reminders of the privileged life I lead. Stories like these are some of them. Sometimes the inability to affect change can feel overwhelming and I feel it necessary to draw the vision back to my small circle of influence. If it exists. These would be two very worthwhile reads, I think. While I prefer stories that leave me with a sense of hope, I guess that's not the reality for most of the world's population.

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Annecdotist
19/8/2018 01:54:24 pm

Me too, Norah. Although I’m pretty sure you’ve had a positive influence on loads of school kids.
I think there’s a sliver of hope in both of these novels – although my reviews might not have made that clear. In the first, Omani society has moved away from slavery in a couple of generations and in the second, the family seems to have finally found support in the local community. Nevertheless, the odds are certainly stacked against some people from the very beginning – a sentiment that right-wingers don’t seem to understand, or don’t care. That definitely frustrates me.

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Norah Colvin link
9/9/2018 08:40:06 am

I agree, Anne. Some people are very short-sighted.




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