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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now drives her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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The loss of the self: An Untamed State by Roxane Gay

7/9/2015

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On holiday in Port au Prince, Mireille Duval Jameson is taken at gunpoint from outside her parents’ luxury villa in front of her husband, Michael, and baby son. Held captive, with little food or water, in a suffocating room she calls her cell, by a gang of thugs headed by The Commander, she waits for her father to pay the ransom that will set her free. But Sebastien is not the kind of man to give in to terrorists. Having grown up in Haiti’s blistering poverty himself, although bringing up his family in the USA, he’s not prepared to hand over his hard-earned dollars to men unwilling to work for a living. Besides, rewarding kidnappers increases the risk that they’ll repeat their behaviour, upping the stakes each time. So, while Miri’s husband frantically phones his lawyer back home to see how far he can go towards raising the million-dollar ransom, her father remains calm, calling in a professional negotiator to bargain down his daughter’s price. But, like Kotler in The Betrayers, his principled stance has dreadful consequences for his child, as The Commander and his men inflict their rage on Miri’s body through repeated brutal acts of rape.

It was at this point, around a quarter of the way through the novel, that I reminded myself that I didn’t have to read on. But I’m heartily glad I did. There’s no doubt that this is a disturbing novel, but it’s an important one and its psychological insights profound. While Roxane Gay doesn’t flinch from the horror of Miri’s physical and mental torment, it’s balanced with the backstory of her marriage to Michael and the family story of migration, all unfolding in exquisite prose. And the violence, although painful to read, is not gratuitous: the reader needs to get right inside that cell with Miri to understand how, over the thirteen days of her incarceration, she is taken beyond the bearable to a point where nothing of her former self remains.

With emotionally distant parents and a father demanding nothing less than excellence from his offspring, Miri has grown up as a fighter, afraid to show her vulnerable side. Like the country of her heritage, she’s proud, unwilling to succumb to the demands of her captors, possibly thereby exacerbating the punishment she receives. She argues, refuses to take responsibility for the country’s problems, even though, through the eyes of her all-American husband, the gap between rich and poor is shown to be obscene. As with Melanie Finn’s novel, Shame, there is a question of whether the violence is inevitable, and whether those who do nothing to resolve the grinding poverty are complicit in its continuation.

Yet Miri pays dearly for her parents’ ostentatious displays of wealth in an impoverished land. In the before, as she puts it, she’s been comfortable in her body – breastfeeding, running, making love – just as she’s been comfortable in the lawless country of her roots. When her abused body becomes a torment, her only chance of survival is in dissociating from it and the woman she used to be. In her feral, untamed, state she perceives herself as dead, no-one, referring to the wife and mother of the past in the third person.

On release, her anguish continues, even intensifies, as, psychologically, she’s still in her cage. She cannot give voice to what she’s gone through; indeed, she can hardly speak at all. Touch is unbearable, even from her husband and child, or the doctors who desperately need to treat her wounds. Her family, while sympathetic, can’t understand how she doesn’t recognise she’s free. Finally, it’s on the remote farm with the mother-in-law who never really liked her that healing can begin.

Lorraine’s unflappability was a godsend, but it did make me wonder what would have happened to Miri had she not pitched up at the farm. As a study in both the experience of terror and its aftermath, An Untamed State brought home to me more than anything else I’ve come across recently how poorly modern society accommodates those who’ve lost their way. When the gulf between the damaged and undamaged is as great as that between rich and poor, it’s little wonder that our attempts to assist the vulnerable are often inadequate. Refugees seeking asylum in the rich countries of the West are expected to find the words, and the courage, to give an account of their unspeakable persecution in a rational manner. Those driven mad by the gap between how things are and how they should be are diagnosed and medicated and instructed to get dressed. The concept of asylum for the mentally disturbed, originating as a humane form of refuge from the demands of the world, has sadly fallen into disrepute.

I wasn’t totally taken with the end of the novel, which fast-forwards over a number of years taking in a return visit to Haiti after the 2010 earthquake (the subject of another novel I reviewed, God Loves Haiti), less because of the content than nostalgia for the earlier chapters which were so vividly immediate. It’s hard to believe that this is a debut novel, leaving me in awe of this writer’s brilliance. I urge you to read it. Thanks to Corsair for my proof copy.

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Charli Mills
7/9/2015 11:06:25 pm

What a debut novel. I'm glad you took time to explain the violence and the struggle to return to a sense of self. But I'm really struck by your statement, "When the gulf between the damaged and undamaged is as great as that between rich and poor, it’s little wonder that our attempts to assist the vulnerable are often inadequate." That is so profound and such a growing problem in the US. Distractions (digital screens, medication, entertainment) keep of from noticing. This sounds like a book that calls attention to the gaps. Great review!

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Annecdotist
8/9/2015 12:49:26 pm

Thanks, Charli. The novel really took me inside what it feels like to be estranged from other people by a traumatic experience (and it took me a little while to come out the other end, I must admit), so I am glad you liked the review.

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Norah Colvin link
8/9/2015 12:22:46 pm

Wow, Anne. I don't think you regularly urge us to read a book you have reviewed. I think you often tell us about it and ask us what we think. Your urging is obviously a very strong recommendation so it obviously ticked all the psychologist's boxes. It certainly sounds like a challenging read. I'm not sure I'd be up to this one.

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Annecdotist
8/9/2015 12:57:48 pm

It is challenging and you are not obliged to obey my commands! And of course not everyone would read it in the way that I did. But I did want you to know that I'm mega impressed!

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sarah link
8/9/2015 10:04:08 pm

Wow. I've seen you praise many books but "in awe of this writer’s brilliance" is something! Still... You know me. I would no way pick up this book with that kind of abuse -- way too disturbing for me. Yet, again, though, I read through your review even though, like you did for the book, I thought "I can stop reading this now". ;-) I didn't.

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Annecdotist
9/9/2015 10:58:59 am

Okay, you're excused this one, Sarah! Happy to read the gruesome stuff on your behalf if you keep up with the reviews!

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