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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Coupling and creativity: The Versions of Us by Laura Barnett

3/6/2015

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Version One Laura Barnett is obsessed by the image of a woman on a bicycle swerving to avoid hitting a dog, watched over by a young man casually walking down a lane. Eva and Jim are nineteen, students at Cambridge in 1958, she studying English and he law. Laura has some idea about their backgrounds – Eva the daughter of Jewish musicians who fled Austria in 1938; Jim the son of a now-deceased famous painter and an unstable mother – but she can’t make up her mind where to take them next. So she writes three different versions of their story, falling in love with each such that she can’t bear to discard any one of them. So she puts all three in the same novel.

Version Two Laura Barnett likes romance, but she’s a bit suspicious of the happy-ever-after premise. Although still young herself, she doesn’t agree that later-life get-togethers are somehow inferior to younger couplings. She sets herself the task of writing a novel that will follow the same two characters across their entire adult lives through three different versions of their story: one in which they marry young and two in which they don’t, Eva instead marrying her original boyfriend, the narcissistic actor, David. In these latter two, Eva and Jim’s paths cross intermittently, in one version resulting in an extramarital affair, another in which they recognise their mutual attraction but, either through circumstances or restraint, they remain loyal to their other partners.

Version Three As a writer, journalist and theatre critic, Laura Barnett is interested in creativity. Is it a trait passed down from parent to child? Is it linked to madness? What are the conditions in which it thrives? Does a stable family background help or is it facilitated by an unconventional lifestyle? Can artists be excused infidelity, and are there different expectations for women than for men? She sets out to explore these questions in a novel about the career highs and lows of a writer (Eva) and a painter (Jim).

My Version I don’t know which of these versions – if any – is most true to the author’s intentions, but I do know that, of the three novels I’ve read recently exploring alternate versions of a life (My Real Children and The End of Days), this is the one I most enjoyed. But I do have some reservations. The three different plotlines are presented chronologically, moving between them in short (very filmic) scenes. Although each version of the story is clearly indicated, I did struggle to keep in mind which details belonged where. I’m probably not the ideal reader, as I tend to like my fictional romance to take more of a back seat and I rarely get excited about writers and other artists as characters. Nevertheless, a worthy debut, the object of Weidenfeld and Nicholson’s (to whom thanks for my advance proof copy) biggest marketing and publicity campaign of the year.

Apologies if this review isn’t up to the usual standard; my computer failed to save the version I wrote at the weekend, so I’ve had to redo it to get this out for publication day tomorrow. Fortunately, given that I’d taken few notes, the unusual structure I’d chosen for this one has helped keep most of it in mind, and I’ve managed to rattle it off in under an hour (probably less time than I wasted looking for it). I was tempted to post the gobbledygook that it had saved, but then you’d probably be as frustrated as I was!

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Norah Colvin link
4/6/2015 05:40:31 am

Hi Anne,
What is it with writers' interest in "time travel" in their books? I couldn't see the purpose for it in Jakob's Colours, and it doesn't seem to have a purpose here, other than to confuse the reader. Maybe this one would work if the stories were told alongside each other in three columns, then you could compare each one as you go and it would be easier to keep track of which one you were reading, especially if each column was shaded with a different colour. It's not really a serious suggestion, but it seems to me these stories may be better told as separate entities. I sometimes wish I could make other choices, in addition to, not instead of, the ones I make. That way I could do and achieve everything I want!
I found the comment questioning a link between creativity and madness interesting. While artists are often portrayed that way, I don't think it has to be so.
Thanks for sharing this interesting review rather than gobbledygook. Technology - has been voracious of late!

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Annecdotist
4/6/2015 09:43:14 am

I wouldn't call it "time travel" in this book, as each strand unfolds chronologically, but the confusion for me was moving about between them. I'd hate to read them in three columns: I can't remember which it was but one of JM Coetzee's novels has the page dissected with one story at the top and another at the bottom, and I really couldn't follow that. I even struggled with Alex Christofi's otherwise very funny novel because of the footnotes.
But, you know, with e-book technology you ought to be able to have more options for reading a novel which ever way you want – it wouldn't be that complicated but it seems that, on the whole, they have stayed with the traditional form.
I fear you might not like my novel because it also moves back and forth in time. I think there's a very good reason, particularly how you get to see the main character's childhood twice, but the second time it seems completely different because of something you learn about her halfway through. I hope it's worth the frustration, but I know it won't be for everyone.
Personally, I think the hypothesised association between creativity and madness tends to over-romanticise both. It's true that creativity entails looking at things from a novel perspective, as does madness, but that doesn't mean they are connected. I did supervising MSc thesis many years ago exploring the link between creativity and, I think, depression, but no memory of how this student went about it, or even what he found!
As for the gobbledygook this might have been, it was most peculiar. Never had anything like that happen before.

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sarah link
5/6/2015 11:35:38 am

I'm with Norah. This is the...third book written this way you've reviewed? So interesting. I'd like to try one of them. It's a fascinating set-up. I take it you liked this one (at least more than the other two which, if I recall, you liked as well). The review is great. I'm not sure you could write a bad review if you tried. (Well, if you tried really hard, I'm sure you could do it...) ;-)

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Annecdotist
6/6/2015 06:55:46 am

Sarah, you're too kind. It is a fascinating setup, but a little confusing to keep all the strands in mind. But we all think about what if, so it's right to put it in a novel.

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Charli Mills
5/6/2015 04:31:18 pm

Ah, that's so frustrating to have to re-do work because of a computer glitch. However, nothing about this review seems sub par. I find it curious, though -- a new genre on the horizon? Alternate versions of a life.

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Annecdotist
6/6/2015 06:57:15 am

Thanks, Charli, no idea how that happened but all come out okay in the end.
I wonder if this could be a new genre, or at least a subgenre, as there are plenty of others I haven't read (well one I can think of for now, Kate Atkinson's Life after Life).

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