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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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The lodger’s hands: Fell by Jenn Ashworth

8/9/2016

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We hated them but we never, ever suggested we should have them taken out. It might have been the money but more likely it just didn’t occur to us. You worked round things and played the best hand you could with the cards you’d been dealt. That was our way. Whatever the neighbours said and however badly we needed the money, we clung on, as if the house wasn’t a gift to us from Jack’s dead parents, but their flesh and blood itself.
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Following the death of her stepmother, Annette Clifford returns to her childhood home in the former spa town of Grange-over-Sands. She finds it damp and decaying, its stability threatened by the roots of the two sprawling sycamores from which it takes its name. When Eve, the local tree surgeon, is unable to help immediately, Annette, in a drunken fugue, attacks them with a handsaw, doing more harm to herself than the ancient trees.

The main strand of the novel, however, begins in the summer of 1963, when Annette is eight years old. Along with her father, Jack, and mother, Netty, the family survives on the rent from the lodgers who occupy the downstairs rooms. Unbeknown to her daughter, Netty is already riddled with cancer, when, on a rare family outing to the lido, Jack’s myopia is suddenly cured by a violent laying-on-of-hands at the poolside. Thinking Tim Richardson, the young man responsible, will save Netty’s life now the doctors have virtually washed their hands of her, Jack lures him to the house with an invitation to Sunday dinner. Soon he’s installed in the remaining vacant room, although strangely reluctant to begin treating Netty. As her condition worsens, and Tim’s power in the household grows, Annette is increasingly neglected, a ghost in her own house.

Like Sal in The Summer That Melted Everything, Tim doesn’t particularly welcome his healing hands; their capacities sporadic and uncontrollable, their effects on ailing bodies never clear. While Netty puts her trust in him, the reader is never sure of his motivations: is he an ordinary young man with pretensions of becoming a tailor or a swindling fraud? As in Death and the Seaside, the shoreline, with its tidal oscillations and more gradual transformation from beach to saltmarsh, is the perfect setting for a story about the borderland between fantasy and reality, and how nothing stays the same indefinitely (p115):

one day the wind will turn again and when it does the Kent remember itself and advance on the marsh to drown the cordgrass. After the spring tides new channels will emerge overnight and turn the sea-washed turf into a treacherous maze of unmapped islands, slippery knolls and sucking mudflats.


I’d read good things about Jenn Ashworth’s previous three novels but somehow hadn’t got round to reading any but, when I saw it was set, like Owl Song at Dawn, around Morecambe Bay and centred on a guesthouse to boot,  I decided it was time to give her writing a try. But seeing that it was narrated by the spirits of Annette’s parents, I had some reservations; as I’ve said before, the supernatural really isn’t my thing. However, I found them quite endearing – especially their coming into and going out of consciousness at the novel’s beginning and end – and not at all intrusive (but I’ve held off from mentioning them until this point in order not to deter other realists). They also serve to emphasise Annette’s lack of substance by, despite not having bodies or voices, seeming more real than she is.

The culture and attitudes of the 60s is well captured in various small details (although I did wonder at Jack paying the driver when he gets on the bus). Because it chimes with the latest topic of Irene Waters’ Times Past project, I’ve picked out the poignancy of Netty’s hospital experience in which the patients’ emotions prove an untidy distraction from the “real” work (p60-61):

‘We’ll have none of that carry-on, please,’ and this is how Netty learned she’d been crying in the night. She said Netty wasn’t to be a nuisance but should lie still and concentrate on getting herself better. So Netty was good. She lay still and felt blood seeping into the thick pad tucked between her legs … She was trying to cheer him up and be positive, like the doctors had said, but Jack only squeezed her hand and squinted at his crossword because he was ashamed of her. She was ashamed of herself.


Due to the pressures inherent in the job, I imagine things haven’t actually moved on much as we would like.

Published by Sceptre Books, who provided my review copy, Fell is a compellingly atmospheric novel, well deserving of its place on my growing haunted houses bookshelf.
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Norah Colvin link
11/9/2016 11:20:00 am

I'm not really into the supernatural either, Anne. But I quite like the sound of this one. It's an interesting title and what you've hinted at with the sycamore trees sounds intriguing. Thanks for sharing.

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Annecdotist
14/9/2016 10:23:04 am

Thanks, Norah, it could be subtitled The Supernatural for Rationalists! Fell could refer to the trees as well as to the hills behind the town. (I decided to look up the latter on Wikipedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fell
the word is familiar to me from the Lake District but not used so much elsewhere)

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Charli Mills
13/9/2016 05:19:26 am

What a unique read, and way to narrate. You had mentioned that Annette was a ghost in the house during her parents' focus on her mother's illness, yet it is the parents who are the narrating ghosts. Interesting twists in presenting a story.

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Annecdotist
14/9/2016 10:25:09 am

Thanks, Charli, though just to be clear, we know that the parents are ghosts from the beginning but, on my reading, Annette is certainly initially more ghostly in her lack of substance.

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Irene Waters link
1/10/2016 08:47:45 am

Hi Anne. Thanks for thinking of this months prompt and coming up with a fiction response that could well ring true in life. How often do those wiht cancer or their loved turn to remedies outside the square. And I do hope you are wrong that with the pressures inherent in the job we haven't changed from the sentiments in your quoted piece. It makes me cringe. The book itself, I agree with Norah, may be one that would hold my interest despite the supernatural element. Thanks for joining in. Cheers Irene

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Annecdotist
2/10/2016 06:39:31 pm

I’m sure there have been improvements, Irene, and that the staff want to care, but service cuts and other pressures, along with the ordinary stresses of the work itself, can result in uncaring actions.

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