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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
Away from her desk, Anne guides book-loving walkers through the Derbyshire landscape that inspired Charlotte Brontë’s Jane Eyre.
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Through the eyes of another: The Snow Kimono by Mark Henshaw

15/4/2015

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A retired French police inspector receives a letter from a woman claiming to be his daughter. A Japanese law professor is thrilled when the little girl he lives with addresses him as Father; how can he tell her that her real father is in jail? A self-centred writer who steals, not just others’ stories, but their entire identities. A father travels from the mountains to leave his daughter in the city as a rich man’s concubine. A double, or triple, agent in the Algerian independence movement, who is even prepared to deceive his wife. The perfect ingredients of a short story collection? No, this is a novel.

It’s a novel composed of stories within stories within stories, like matryoshka dolls, as Tadashi Omura collars Auguste Jovert to offload the tale of his adopted daughter and his increasingly unreliable friend, Katsuo. Yet, unlike those Russian dolls, the stories don’t fit neatly one inside the other as we jump back and forth between France, Algeria and Japan, moving in time across four decades at the end of the last century. Nor, although well written, are they sufficiently distinct in style or genre, like David Mitchell’s Cloud Atlas, to astound us with their brilliant audacity. And while the novel provides a rationale for the structure in terms of the Japanese saying:

If you want to see your life, you have to see through the eyes of another

it seems too much of a truism to support the credulity-stretching device of chance meetings that connect the three men. Aren’t readers accustomed to finding our own lives reflected in the stories of others we come across in fiction? Don’t writers regularly find inspiration in what others have written? The Rough Writers practice at this weekly over at the Carrot Ranch.

By three quarters of the way through my reading experience was akin to a meal comprised solely of hors d’oeuvres. I wondered if the Australian government had decreed that writers could publish only one novel in their lifetimes, and this was Mark Henshaw’s sole opportunity to display his disparate interests. But surely, I thought, despite having read Camus at school, I couldn’t be the only English-language reader whose knowledge of the Algerian fight for independence was so skimpy I couldn’t be satisfied with a novel that only scratched the surface. I couldn’t, despite the recent popularity of novels featuring geishas, be the only reader who needed a larger portion of that strand too.

But woe the reviewer who falls into the trap of precrastination and writes her piece before she’s finished the novel! (I didn’t, but I did record some ideas – along with the howling wind – on my phone when out walking at the weekend.) Because in those last hundred pages the pieces of the Japanese side of the story came together in a satisfying manner, which I can’t relate without spoiling. There was also a lovely twist I hadn’t anticipated which excused the unlikely meeting between the lawyer and the police inspector right at the start. This made me wonder if the author was using those professions in the way a writer might use a psychological therapist, a character who enables others to tell their stories in order to avoid focusing on their own.

In conclusion, The Snow Kimono holds together much more than I thought originally, but I’m still leaving the table with a vague sense of wanting more. Perhaps it’s more like a meal made up of tapas than hors d’oeuvres. Thanks to Tinder Press for my review copy.

Thanks for reading. I'd love to know what you think. If you've enjoyed this post, you might like to sign up via the sidebar for regular email updates and/or my quarterly Newsletter.
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Norah Colvin link
16/4/2015 06:18:27 am

The individual plots sound interesting, Anne, and I like the sound of a twist at the end and everything being tied together. However I'm not sure (depending on the length of the book) if I would persist to find that satisfaction only in the last 100 pages. I like to have a little more than that to keep me going earlier on in a story. However, reading your review would provide some encouragement to persist.

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Annecdotist
16/4/2015 07:13:28 am

I know what you mean, Norah, but I didn't feel tempted to give up on this one. although it's almost 400 pages, the print's quite large – which I do appreciate with my ageing eyes – so it didn't take too long. Also, how reading experience can be influenced by the book that came before which, in this case, was extremely engaging with a very lively style. I aspire to judge each book by its own criteria, but it doesn't always work out that way!

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Norah Colvin link
19/4/2015 05:13:46 am

Your persistence is to be admired,Anne. I'm sure Henshaw appreciates it! :)

Annecdotist
19/4/2015 07:46:26 am

Ha, nice that you should to think so, Norah. I imagine the author might be less appreciative of the fact that I thought persistence was required!

Christy B link
16/4/2015 01:36:35 pm

It sounds like the main meal came slightly later than expected after the hors d'oeuvres. I think this is a book I would want to read as I would like to know what the twist is. I'm glad you didn't give away any spoilers! I enjoyed your review.

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Annecdotist
17/4/2015 05:31:01 am

Thanks, Christy, and welcome to my blog. I think it is very interesting how it all fits together in the end, and I don't think it could really have been done any differently but I did wonder whether it was going at times.

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Charli Mills
16/4/2015 09:29:48 pm

I'm not sure I have the patience required to maintain my attention through such a read. But it does make me interested to read and find out!

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Annecdotist
17/4/2015 05:32:48 am

I think for a reader who already knows the author there'd be no problem, and also if you're comfortable with thrillers. One of the blurbs on the book describes it as "a thriller for the intellect". Perhaps that's a whole new genre!

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geoff link
17/4/2015 11:24:15 am

I enjoyed Cloud Atlas greatly so novels that have that sort for structure appeal. It is tricky to keep going sometime, hoping. Good that it proved worthy of your effort

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Annecdotist
18/4/2015 11:40:36 am

I do keep going when I can, but first impressions – or at least early impressions – seem to matter more and more to me.

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mark henshaw
21/4/2015 04:48:42 am

See, authors DO read blogs, and I've been following Anne's with interest. The Snow Kimono is a book that takes time to evolve - I'm not interested in a thrill-a-minute kind of writing. I hope, at the end, while to pace might be slower than some readers might be used to, that you might find that you were both moved AND entertained. Plus I was hoping readers might find in The Snow Kimono a kind of poetry that isn't found in a lot of contemporary fiction. Happy reading whatever the case, and thank you for your comments. Mark Henshaw

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Annecdotist
6/9/2018 11:18:07 am

Thanks for reading, Mark. Sorry I missed this earlier.

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Cara Mengatasi Pandangan Mata Kabur Dan Buram Tanpa Kacamata link
6/9/2018 08:25:48 am

This article is very useful, thank you for sharing. And allow me to share articles too, it's about health and treatment. God willing

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Annecdotist
6/9/2018 11:21:21 am

Thanks for reading, Cara.

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