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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Two novelistic takes on fostering: My Name is Leon & The Lauras

27/7/2016

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Busy with my birthday blog tour, my reviews have been somewhat neglected this month. So good to find a theme to link a couple of books together. Set in Britain, My Name Is Leon is about a boy’s struggle to adapt to being too black for adoption; set in the USA, The Lauras is about a woman revisiting the places she was fostered through the eyes of her own child.

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At nearly nine, in the early 1980s, Leon loves his new baby brother, Jake. Which is just as well since, as his mother takes to her bed, realising that the baby isn’t going to bring back Jake’s father, responsibility for the family’s well-being soon falls on Leon’s slim shoulders. When they run out of food and nappies, Leon reluctantly asks for help. Soon, he and Jake are living with Maureen and their mother is in psychiatric care.

Maureen has a lovely way with the boys, initially taking two pages of notes on what Leon has learnt about how best to care for his brother. But Maureen can’t prevent them being separated when their mother isn’t deemed capable of having them back and Jake is put forward for adoption. A new forever family is easily found for a white baby; for a black nine-year-old it’s another matter.

But worse is to come. Much older than his mother, and heavily overweight, Maureen is hospitalised with a heart defect. Leon moves home and school again to stay with Maureen’s less endearing sister, Sylvia. But he does at least have a bike, which gives him the freedom to visit the allotments, where he is befriended by the charismatic Tufty and cantankerous old Mr Devlin. Tufty’s gangsta friends bring the police to the site, and the enactment of their brutal racism is not suitable viewing for a vulnerable child. But Leon has his own agenda: he’s going to find his brother and bring his mother back. When his plans collide with a night of riots, Leon and his two adult friends are tested to their limits.

Related in simple well-crafted prose as befits a young central character, My Name Is Leon is a heartstring-tugging tale of how children with the misfortune to be born into the wrong family can be disadvantaged and often failed by the system set up to help them. I thought Leon’s management of his anger was particularly sensitively handled, with hints of how a vulnerable child can become a monster. It’s particularly challenging for a writer to conjure a satisfying ending for such a story: too hopeful and it’s unconvincing; too pessimistic and the reader feels deprived of payback for our emotional commitment to the characters. Although perfectly plotted, I’m not totally convinced Kit de Waal makes it, but it’s nevertheless an impressive debut with well-deserved endorsements from Chris Cleave and Emma Healey. Thanks to Viking Penguin for my review copy.

Thirteen-year-old Alex is used to being kept awake at night by the sound of Ma and Dad arguing, but this time it’s different. This time, Ma bungles Alex into the car and they set off for what turns out to be a two-year pilgrimage from their home in Virginia to California and on to Canada, dropping in on the places and people that shaped the mother’s own adolescence, including spells in foster care.

Since Alex is the narrator, and Ma does not dare disclose the purpose of her mission to her child, Sara Taylor has turned the quest genre on its head. Much as I’m suspicious of the advice that a writer should make clear what her characters want, this did make the journey seem somewhat bitty, although the pickanmix of encounters with Lauras and non-Lauras were sometimes poignant, especially towards the end. I enjoyed the overlap with Armadillos in the hitchhiking vulnerable teen and with A Song for Issy Bradley in the claustrophobia of a patriarchal religious family, although the themes of sexuality and gender identity weren’t resolved as much as I’d have liked.

Nevertheless, the writing is strong enough to render Alex and Ma sufficiently entertaining travel companions. Like Hope Farm, The Lauras is the story of a young mother who is almost as vulnerable as her teenage child, dragging said child along on a developmental journey of her own. Having missed out on Sara Taylor’s acclaimed debut, The Shore, I was curious to sample her writing courtesy of William Heinemann, and would be interested to discover how her readers think the two compare.

For other novels featuring fostering and adoption, see The Children's Home and The Good Guy for reviews of novels I’ve read recently. But there must be others. Do you know any?
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Norah Colvin link
30/7/2016 07:37:24 am

Hi Anne, Another couple of interesting books. I think I'd find My Name is Leon a bit confronting, though I would find it very interesting. It does sound like a challenging story to both write and read, but I'd like to give it a go sometimes. I wonder where you think the author didn't quite make it.
I'm not sure that I would enjoy The Laura's, though it would be interesting to read the story from the point of view of someone who doesn't know what's going on.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about these books. As always, very interesting.

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Annecdotist
1/8/2016 12:16:48 pm

Ha, Norah, as you know I’m not a meliorist, and – as much as I can remember, having been to sleep a couple of times since I finished the book – I think the ending was a little too hopeful, though many have wholeheartedly praised the book. But, for you it might be different, a rewarding conclusion to the challenge of following poor Leon’s predicament.

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Charli Mills link
2/8/2016 12:10:16 am

Leon's character already tugs at my heart-strings through your review! Being a part of a system, I see how these huge organizations can be so focused on minute (and truly unimportant) details that the whole of the person being assisted is lost. It sounds like a memoir I read, but now I'm forgetting the title and author...it was about a Latino woman's similar upbringing and her attachment to a baby sister who died as a result of neglect.

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Annecdotist
2/8/2016 10:57:39 am

Interesting – a similar story to that memoir although perhaps not quite as harrowing, as at least the adopted baby seemed to have thrived.
I think, however, social services are in an extremely tricky position making difficult decisions for which they attract the blame when things go wrong, which is partly why they are forced to focus on the inessentials which everyone knows aren't needed but just to cover their backs. It's important to remember that the neglect doesn't start within these organisations (at least most of the time) but that they are trying to salvage something from extremely unfortunate circumstances.

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Charli Mills link
4/8/2016 06:37:01 am

Yes, this is true for social services. I'm thinking of greater bureaucracy in government organizations such as the VA which, so far, it has taken 6 appointments just to get Todd an MRI for his knee and along the way they want to focus on issues of paperwork to determine eligibility and entitlement. It should only matter that he served his country, destroyed his knees in service and should receive care for his knees. So many veterans give up before they get the help. Of course, issues of children in abusive homes and social workers trying to protect themselves, the child the agency, it must be controlled chaos. Have we made it too complex dealing with social issues and care?

Annecdotist
5/8/2016 09:30:06 am

Oh, yes, it's the same here, Charli, with extra complicated form-filling introduced for people claiming benefits. They'd argue it's to prevent fraud, but I'm convinced it's to put off many from proceeding. If only there were so careful about tax evasion by the rich!




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