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I started this blog in 2013 to share my reflections on reading, writing and psychology, along with my journey to become a published novelist.​  I soon graduated to about twenty book reviews a month and a weekly 99-word story. Ten years later, I've transferred my writing / publication updates to my new website but will continue here with occasional reviews and flash fiction pieces, and maybe the odd personal post.

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After art school: The Chalk Artist & You

4/5/2018

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After my last post featuring two novels about fictional teenagers going missing in the Peak District, the link between these reviews is more tenuous. While both feature men who have found a salaried position after art school – the first going into the gaming industry without completing his degree; the second joining the ranks of fictional therapists as a rare art therapist – these novels seem quite different. Yet both also feature obsession: the first with the alternate reality of computer games; the second with an estranged daughter. See what you think.

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The Chalk Artist by Allegra Goodman

Sixteen-year-old Aidan is a promising student until a computer game starts swallowing his waking hours, as well as several of the hours in which he ought to be sleep. Twenty-something Collin is a college dropout with a talent for the kind of art that has no commercial outlet – quickfire sketches in chalk which he rubs out as soon as they’re finished – until he’s taken on by the gaming company Arkadia. Two women bridge these young men’s narratives: Nina, conscientious but inexperienced teacher of Aidan’s troubled twin sister and daughter of Arkadia’s owner who gets Collin, her boyfriend, his job; Daphne, Collin’s charismatic colleague and Arkadia marketing supremo who lures Aidan deeper into the gaming world.
 
Can these characters escape the alternate reality, or will it consume them all?
 
The Chalk Artist is an engaging story of addiction, love and loyalty, although perhaps a challenging one for those with teenagers suspected of selling their souls to games. I found it a poignant tale of young people learning to judge for themselves what they’re good at and thereby finding their place in the world.
 
One of the author’s previous novels, Intuition, about overly zealous academics in a research lab, made
my post on fictional research, suggesting (yes, from a sample of two) over-involvement is one of Allegra Goodman’s themes. The Chalk Artist has the added bonus of a fictional school psychologist, albeit for only a few lines. Thanks to British publisher Atlantic Books for my review copy.

You by Phil Whitaker

When parents fall out of love, it can be hard to collaborate over the welfare of their children. Sometimes one parent is so consumed by their grievance against their former partner that they force their offspring to take sides. When this turns particularly nasty, the court might have to intervene. Sometimes, hard-pressed and ill-informed judges pronounce a verdict in favour of the manipulator, endorsing a parent-child estrangement that can be devastating for both. This is the topic of Phil Whittaker’s sixth novel.
 
Stevie Buchanan is taking the train to Oxford in the hope of seeing his twenty-one-year-old daughter who’s studying there. The meeting seems unlikely: she’s ignored all his communications for the last seven years. On the way, he muses on how this has come about, as well as reflecting on the support group he attended and the different outcomes for the mothers and fathers involved.
 
In reviewing the past, Stevie leaves his present-day body to swoop across the English countryside, his daughter flying behind or alongside him until they descend to earth as spectres to view the events that have shaped the family system across generations. I do hope other readers appreciate this whimsy; I’d have been happier without it.
 
Stevie formulates his predicament convincingly in terms of his former partner’s addiction to victimhood, rooted in her own mother’s indifference to her as a child. Much as I relished the acknowledgement of
attachment issues and their impact on parenting, I’m afraid I found this rather preachy, and his minimisation of the potential contribution of his own pathology (as a compulsive rescuer) to the collapse of the family rather irritating. (His own sense of victimhood, however legitimate, was pressed on the reader so strongly – and on the daughter-in-his-head to whom the you of the title is addressed – I expected there to be some kind of reversal, showing Stevie was not as innocent as he’d have us believe.)
 
I also found it odd that Stevie should attribute all the theory of attachment, psychological defences, and the triangular space of victim, perpetrator and rescuer to the academic psychologist in his support group rather than his own discipline of art therapy. (But the acknowledgements testify that he’s checked this out with a couple of practitioners and I might be biased through my experience of working alongside art therapists with a psychodynamic orientation.) I also wondered about his pressing a client in the medium-secure unit where he works to tell how it feels when, to my mind, the strength of art therapy is in its communication beyond words.
 
Nevertheless, with the profession underrepresented in my collection of
fictional psychologists and psychotherapists (one being Liesel in my own novel, Underneath; the other actually identified as a clinical psychologist; both, incidentally, like Stevie, employed in secure mental health services), it was heartening to discover another fictional art therapist.
 
You is a psychologically ambitious novel about the damage wrought by poor parenting which, despite
my appreciation of the author’s last book, I found insufficiently subtle. Thanks to Salt for my review copy.
 
My short story “As Smell of Paint” which will appear in my forthcoming anthology, also features a mother who has turned her daughter against her father following an acrimonious divorce. For another novel where the responsibility is shared equally between the estranged parents, see
One of the Boys. For a couple of other novels that articulate attachment theory without bludgeoning the reader, see my reviews of The Course of Love and The Gustave Sonata.

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Over on the Carrot Ranch, Charli Mills is getting excited about the colourful signs of spring. But, as a few months back when we wrote about edges, she’s concerned, like a child with a colouring book, about going over the lines. While this week’s 99-word story prompt (click on tap on the image for more information) immediately (or soon after my usual initial hesitation protesting I can’t do that) made me think of the artists in these novels, I’ve chosen to write about another kind of line.

Imaginary lion

She used to think it was a lion circling the earth. But, older now, she saw how dumb that was: not even an imaginary lion could walk on water. No, it was a line, as she wrote in her essay, anticipating a shiny gold star. And everyone standing on that line – Brazilians, Kenyans, Congolese – would be equal. That’s what equator meant. No billionaires guzzling caviar while others starved. When she grew up she’d join them. Or maybe not. Maybe she’d find a way to thicken the line to a band and stretch it from the Arctic to Cape Horn.

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Luccia Gray link
6/5/2018 12:34:33 pm

Great flash! I love the idea of stretching the line to make us all equal.

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Annecdotist
7/5/2018 10:56:12 am

Sadly it seems that the more some of us try to stretch it, the more others squeeze it back.

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Molly Stevens link
6/5/2018 08:51:42 pm

Love the word play of equator being an equalizer. Stretching the band would create a new world. - Molly

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Annecdotist
7/5/2018 10:54:33 am

Thanks, Molly. If only!

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Anurag Bakhshi link
7/5/2018 10:47:18 am

It became this thin through a twist of fate centuries ago , it HAS to widen for the world to start making sense again.

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Annecdotist
7/5/2018 10:58:23 am

Good point. While it seems there’s always been a gap between rich and poor it seems to have widened rather than shrunk.

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Charli Mills
10/5/2018 04:15:36 am

You catch my attention with any books relating to attachment theory or fictional therapists, Anne. And yet your character seems to have a strong determination to see the world more equal.

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Annecdotist
11/5/2018 05:48:35 pm

I’m most grateful these reviews and my flash have attracted your attention, Charli. I know you’re a busy woman!

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