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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now drives her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Come into my cave! #amwriting

24/6/2018

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As Britain hurtles towards the cliff edge of Brexit, and the President of the United States pays compliments to a dastardly dictator while referring to migrants as animals, it’s as if we’ve learned nothing from the run up to the Second World War. If politics were fiction – if only! – we’d be approaching the crisis point known as the cave.


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In a story structure derived from classical mythology, the cave, in the words of Charli Mills, is
 
the hero’s darkest hour where she falls into the abyss of her most extreme ordeal. It’s a place where it feels like the hero has met her end, but is reborn. Her own power or will to live is revealed and she crawls out of the cave.
 
I’ve been slow to embrace this consciously in my own writing for a whole hodgepodge of reasons, including that my characters
aren't heroes who know what they want and because sometimes the hero’s journey structure, especially as promoted by creative writing tutors, becomes formulaic.
 
But I seem to be on the road to conversion: partly because Charli has pointed out I have borrowed elements, however unwittingly yet with good effect, in my first two published novels, and partly because I’m discovering that, as a reader, I find novels less satisfying if they don’t have enough plot.
 
How much is enough, will vary from reader to reader. I’ve read too many novels where character and credibility is sacrificed to narrative tension to totally relinquish my reservations about plot-heavy books. But I’ve also read many that beautifully balance forward momentum with real-world relevance and emotional depth. Through my reading and writing, I’m on my own hero’s journey to deliver that better with each book.

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If I’ve been nervous about my ability to create tension by making things progressively more difficult for my characters, it’s all about the cave. Basically, if I can take them to a place it seems impossible to get out of, it might actually be impossible. Or possible only through some authorial equivalent of divine intervention, which amounts to the same thing.
 
Yet it wasn’t until I began to write this post that I appreciated how relevant to my knowledge of psychological change, from both inside and outside, is to clambering out of the cave. Perhaps
last week’s more personal post, where I touched on transformation through therapy, has helped bring this to the fore. Entering therapy partly to explore a cave of which I was only too aware, I discovered darker and deeper cavities beyond it through which I was nevertheless able to creep towards the light.

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Diana, the protagonist of my debut novel, Sugar and Snails, enters her personal cave in the penultimate chapter. Although physically in the kitchen of her home, psychologically she’s in a dark and scary place when she risks disclosing her secret, a mystery revealed to readers several chapters earlier, to her best friend of almost thirty years.

 
The cave is both a physical place and a state of mind in my second novel,
Underneath. The cellar, where Steve keeps a woman captive, is present from the first page, but it’s the gradual unravelling of his mind that traps him in the cave less than a dozen pages from the end. Although, in his own way he is reborn, Steve’s is more of an anti-hero’s journey than Diana’s.

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There are three potential heroes in what I hope will be third novel, Matilda Windsor Is Coming Home. The cave is experienced differently for all three, but the same incident precipitates it: the long-awaited meeting between a brother and sister separated for fifty years. Early on in the writing, I knew what form this incident would take, but it took five drafts before I was satisfied with the manner in which each character would emerge and the extent to which the current experience that Phoenix-like state of renewal.
 
My current WIP, a dystopian novel provisionally entitled
Snowflake, comes closest in structure to the hero’s journey, although my fourteen-year-old narrator is considered somewhat wimpish by his parents and peers. Having been off and on with the first draft for about four months, I’ve recently passed the midpoint when everything is turned upside down. While generally more of a pantser than a planner, I’ve been working to an outline, not so rigidly that I haven’t been able to enjoy discoveries along the way, but with clear crisis points at the 25%, 50% and 75% marks.
 
And a cave, at around 90%, that’s both a physical place, an institution my reluctant hero has feared from early on, and an existential crisis, when he must decide whom he can trust to get him out. Although I’ve yet to work out the mechanics of leaving, I know which way he’ll turn and how he’ll come to realise there are other forms of heroism than those his culture demands. As that culture is characterised by xenophobia, toughness and nostalgia for
lost Empire, there’s – sadly – a lot in current sociopolitics to spur me on.

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I wasn’t sure how to respond to the latest flash fiction prompt or, riding the latest thermal with my WIP, whether I’d have time. Then came the urge to reflect on my writerly relationship with the cave. On the hero’s journey, the cave is the place where everything seems lost, but the writer’s job is to find that seed of redemption where not all is lost.


As it wouldn’t do to give away the secrets of my novels, whether published or as yet unpublished, my 99-word story is about feeling you’ve lost the plot as a writer, an experience sometimes labelled
writer’s block.

Creative cul-de-sac?

Some days I led the way and, obediently, they followed. On better days, they raced ahead and I trailed after. On bad days, I bribed and begged for their company.

Sometimes, the path unwound for miles ahead. Sometimes, each step seemed virgin territory. Sometimes, we backtracked to try from a different angle. But always moving, discovering, until they abandoned me in darkness, sour and dank, patting the walls but no sign of an exit. Stuck. Despairing. All that effort wasted.

A chink of light that, as I watch, grows. Bigger. Brighter. Braver than before, we leave the cave together.

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Norah Colvin link
25/6/2018 11:32:26 am

I enjoyed reading these reflections on your writing process, Anne, and of the placement and type of 'cave' for each of your protagonists. I hadn't considered the percent rule, but I guess that's true. I am, as you know, intrigued by your next novel, and your WIP and look forward to an opportunity of reading them. I find it interesting that although you may not have purposefully followed the hero's structure, it was inbuilt anyway. I guess that comes from reading widely enough for some things to become a part of your thinking and not require conscious effort.
So true is your 99 word story, and how wonderful it is when everyone rides out together!

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Annecdotist
26/6/2018 04:18:46 pm

Thank you for your comment, Norah, and for your support of my writing in general. Good to know I’ll have at least one reader for my next novels :-)
I’m not sure it’s a rule – I’m not sure anything is a rule – but it does help to position these points of interest at regular intervals. And of course it can’t be so precise, although I find I’m getting gradually closer to these ratios with more experience.

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Charli Mills
26/6/2018 03:12:01 am

You have returned from the cave of your novel-writing with the elixir, Anne! I think we naturally think of stories in the hero's journey because we live these narratives in our own lives. If our brains are hardwired for stories, then we want ones that give us insights, spur us on the discover, and live the lives of others through characters. You know I'm enamored with the hero's journey, and it's been fun seeing it in your books, including an impressive trio of caves in your latest manuscript. Today, I had a gig teaching the structure of story-telling to six entrepreneurs to coach them in a presentation they have next month, and the one structure they all connected with was the hero's journey. Your flash fits perfectly the topic of "not all is lost."

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Annecdotist
26/6/2018 04:13:25 pm

Thanks for your feedback, Charli, as well as your help in unpicking the hero’s journey in my fiction. I’m certainly getting into it in my WIP taking my reluctant hero into cavelets in the last few writing days well before we hit the cave proper. But I’m already wondering where I’m going with this in my overall writing process – I have a bit of a sense I might have to prove to myself I can do it / brave the difficulties, in order not to have to do, like musicians studying the classics before producing something experimental.
I say that because – and also perhaps partly because I just replied to a long comment from Irene about memoir (and my aversion thereof) – although you’re right that people do generally enjoy stories about overcoming adversity etc I’m not sure that it’s the narrative for me (in real life) – and it might just be the mood I’m in but I think it might be an adventure to find out what is.
Nevertheless I think a great idea of yours to share the structure with entrepreneurs – a speech is always more engaging if it unfolds as a story.

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