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I started this blog in 2013 to share my reflections on reading, writing and psychology, along with my journey to become a published novelist.​  I soon graduated to about twenty book reviews a month and a weekly 99-word story. Ten years later, I've transferred my writing / publication updates to my new website but will continue here with occasional reviews and flash fiction pieces, and maybe the odd personal post.

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Families in recovery? Grown Ups by Marian Keyes

13/1/2024

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Three brothers in their forties gather periodically with their wives and children for holidays, weekend breaks and celebratory meals. On the surface, everything is rosy, but secrets threaten every marriage; will the extended family survive?

​I’d heard of this much-loved author but didn’t expect to pick up one of her books until an agent recommended them as a model for my own writing. Reading the prologue, I wondered how I’d plough through the next 600+ pages.
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A confusion of characters. A brother fears he’s choking – but fails to convince me. A wife is supposed to have had a head injury but – all too conveniently – her sole symptom is disinhibition as she poises on the verge of exposing some uncomfortable truths.
 
It got better. Much better. I found the characters credible and admired how the author weaves their individual back stories and dilemmas into the main narrative (albeit she does give herself twice the length of an ordinary novel to do so). There’s a hilarious scene at a third-rate murder mystery weekend, a sensitive account of one woman’s struggle with an eating disorder and a nod to social (in)justice through a minor character who is a refugee. I liked it, but not enough to join her numerous fans.
 
I thought I’d get away with writing a review until a counsellor showed up. Peggy is more directive than my typical fictional therapist, but she’s the right person for a character in denial about her bulimia. My only criticism is her unwillingness to question her client’s lateness and request to leave early in any depth.
 
With strong writing, expert plotting, believable characters, humour and sufficient low-key jeopardy, it’s hard to pin down why didn’t enjoy it more. The agent I consulted said readers want characters they can identify with, but I didn’t identify with any of these. Maybe that’s the problem? In my reading I want something different to what’s popular and the general reader wants something different to what I write. I’ve enrolled for a course with the author in February, so perhaps I’ll learn more about that gap then.
 
The blurb from Caitlin Moran likens this novel to “reading the cleverest cream cake of words”. I have to agree, but I’m more likely to fancy a salad with a sourdough roll. Or something with a deeper question than how do families get along. What do you think?

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When I saw that the prompt for this week’s flash fiction challenge was recovery, I considered writing about recovery from mental health crises, inspired by both this novel and my previous work as a clinical psychologist. But currently there’s a much bigger recovery issue uniting most of the population of the UK. It’s not recovery from Brexit or the devastation of fourteen years of Tory misrule, where some still cling to delusions of success. It’s Britain’s most trusted brand, the Post Office.
Around the turn of the millennium, the Post Office installed a new computer system that, for well over a decade, got its sums wrong, resulting in hundreds of subpostmasters being wrongly convicted of false accounting, fraud and/or theft. Many lost their livelihoods, their homes, their mental well-being. Some served prison sentences and at least one committed suicide. Yet the Post Office insisted their systems were robust.
 
I’d read snippets of this major miscarriage of justice in the papers over the last few years and began researching it for possible novel at the end of last year. But, as it hadn’t had a great deal of media attention, I wondered whether it would be one of those true stories that are simply too incredible for fiction. Now, however, thanks to a TV drama that began screening on New Year’s Day, the whole country is outraged. It must be weird for these people who were vilified for years to suddenly discover everyone is on their side. I don’t know a single one of them personally but, simply thinking about it, has me tearing up. Of course, my 99-word story can’t do justice to what they’ve been through, but we have to hope this is a step towards recovery.
Recovering the Money
 
They came to recover the money they claimed I’d stolen. They believed the computer more than they trusted me.
 
For months I’d barely slept, trying to trace the error. Unless I approved the accounts, I couldn’t open. If I didn’t open, pensions couldn’t be paid. So I borrowed from family and my few remaining friends. Yet still they pursued me to court.
 
Now that the world knows I’m innocent, I can recover my reputation. But they stole more than that from me. I want the thousands they bullied me into handing over. I want the Chief Executive’s bonus pay.
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6 Comments
D. Avery link
21/1/2024 03:24:11 pm

Holy shit! That postal story is unbelievable. The background here is worse than I imagined when I read your flash at the ranch. How do you ever make reparations to those falsely accused? But let's plough ahead with AI.

I would pass by a novel that is a clever cream-cake of words. I like more substantial food, sourdough bread and a salad would be preferred. I wonder if that novel would be more filling if she took the stuffing out of it, if she revised it with a word limit; maybe not 99 words, but cut it down to 300-400 pages at least.

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Anne Goodwin
23/1/2024 03:34:59 pm

Yeah, appalling, but it wasn't only the computer system that did the damage. Vital evidence was withheld from investigations and, although there is a public enquiry now, it's still going to be a long haul to bring those responsible to justice, if it ever happens.

I feel it's part of my job as a writer to try and understand what makes certain types of fiction more popular than others. I know that for a lot of readers I won't deliver enough of the feelgood factor but I struggle enough to articulate just how much of the dark side I want to read myself.

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Norah Colvin
25/2/2024 10:07:48 am

I have seen 'posters' for the TV series. Perhaps I'll watch it. Will you still write it?
How disappointing to have an author's work recommended as a model and then not really like it at all. Someone didn't/doesn't know you very well.

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Anne Goodwin
25/2/2024 03:11:03 pm

Thanks for your supportive comment, Norah. I can strongly recommend the TV series – it's engrossing, well acted and as close to the facts as I can recall from the non-fiction book I read at the end of last year.

Yes, that agent didn't know me – it's very hard to get any feedback from agents so I was grateful for this despite it not being what I wanted to hear – but she had read my opening. It was actually for a different book that I was working on last year, which another agent has now read more of, and liked it, both subject and style, but said it's a bit too sad for today's climate. I think she's right so I've put it aside for now, but I believe the story is important and I will come back to it.

So yes, I'm continuing with the post office scandal novel (although it could be about any miscarriage of justice) and have shown the opening to another agent (yes, sorry this is confusing, that's three different agents altogether for two different novels) who was very encouraging.

I'm now doing the online course with Marian Keyes – although we only see her in pre-recorded videos, she doesn't look at the students' work. She is absolutely lovely in the videos, down-to-earth and very encouraging, but I don't think successful authors always know WHY readers like their stuff, so there's no magic ingredient they can pass on. But you can always learn something, if only from reflecting on the process from another author's point of view.

All in all, I'm pretty busy at the moment, not much time for blogging, but will get across and check yours out. Thanks for visiting.

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Norah Colvin
22/7/2024 07:04:40 am

Hi Anne,
I'm back again 5 months later. I hope you have made some progress with your 3 agents and 2 novels.
I came back just to check up on you and what I missed since I last dropped by and was interested to read what you had to say about Marian Keyes. I bumped into a friend from long ago last week and she recommended Marian Keyes to me, especially a series set in Ireland about the Walsh family. I began listening to the first in the series "Watermelon" almost straight away and am really enjoying it. Perhaps for all the reasons you didn't enjoy Grown Ups. It's definitely dysfunctional families, but I find the characters, their relationships and situations quite believable and relatable, and I love the humour in her writing. I'd be interested to know what you thought of her course now that it must be in the past. I'd have to say that I'm definitely preferring something lighter at the moment.
I hope you are keeping well. N

Anne Goodwin
23/7/2024 12:06:31 pm

Welcome back, Norah. Hope all's well with you now. Glad you're enjoying the Marian Keyes novel – I'm wondering if she narrates her own books that she has a lovely Irish accent. I'm thinking that possibly for me what put me off was a sense that I'd heard it all before, which can be exactly what you want in a particular frame of mind.

I can't remember much about the course to be honest but it was more motivational – keep at it, everybody struggles, kind of thing – than practical tips and we didn't get to engage directly with her.

I'm not blogging much now but have been getting a lot of spam lately and have set the default to 'requires approval' so it's all gonna be a bit slower I'm afraid. I think I even have to approve my own replies.


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