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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
Away from her desk, Anne guides book-loving walkers through the Derbyshire landscape that inspired Charlotte Brontë’s Jane Eyre.
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Fictional memoir: Charli’s flash challenge

21/4/2014

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Carrot Ranch Communications is one of the great new blogs I discovered on the podium of Norah Colvin’s Liebster nominees.  Here, along with buckaroo-tinged insights into the writing process, Charli Mills poses a weekly flash fiction challenge.  Now, I thought I’d cracked the art of the short short, but my shortest story to date is four times the length of the 99 words set by Charli, practically a saga in comparison.  Each week I checked the writing prompt and each week I let it go by, while admiring the efforts of others who managed to shoehorn a proper narrative into under 100 words.

Maybe it was things winding down for Easter, maybe it was the theme of the challenge, but this week I decided to plunge in.  But boy, was it hard!  Much as I relish pruning back redundant words, this was like growing bonsai.  But I persevered in the knowledge that limits can be liberating for writers, and Charli’s introduction had already drawn me in.

She writes about how a glimpse of the world can spark a memory, and that memory can lead us towards a choice of creative paths.  One leads to memoir, another to fiction: why someone might follow one route rather than the other to tell their story is something I’ve been pondering lately, as I’m looking forward to hosting a post from a memoirist here later this month.

Charli’s 99-word challenge is to “write a biography for a character, alter-ego or you”.  Well, I struggle enough with the bios editors request to accompany my short story publications, so you can guess which way I was going to go.  And I thought it would be useful to tighten up my thinking about a character I’m musing on.  So it’s over to Bernie, in her ninety-nine words:

Winning the TV quiz show, Family Challenge, assured me a rosy future.  My encyclopaedic knowledge would fuel my teaching career.  I hadn’t bargained for a pregnancy midway through the training.  When I surrendered my baby for adoption, I lost my sense of purpose too.

Can’t complain, though.  I work in a school, albeit in admin.  I’m extremely popular on quiz nights down the pub.  But, if people ask if I have children, I don’t know what to say. 

Everything’s changing again, as Jason has made contact.  Given he’s about to become a father, can I call myself Grandma now?

After reading some of the beautifully poetic contributions already up on the site, I think I might have fallen into the trap of prioritising information over style.  Clearly, more practice is in order, but at least I’m getting to know Bernie a little better.

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Lisa Reiter link
21/4/2014 01:48:27 am

Gosh - I hate redundant words but this is quite some challenge! I think you have Bernie's flavour licked in these 99, though :D

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Annecdotist
21/4/2014 04:25:21 am

Thanks, Lisa. Given that you're writing a memoir, are you going to join in?

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Lisa Reiter link
21/4/2014 06:22:45 am

Just did - surprised myself by no perfectionist stalling - now biting my nails !

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Charli Mills link
21/4/2014 08:22:56 am

Thanks for diving into the challenge with such poise! I think the 99 words helps distill the idea of what is elemental to our bigger sagas--longer shorts or novel. It certainly makes me want to know more of Bernie's story!

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Annecdotist
21/4/2014 11:39:06 am

Well done, Lisa and thanks Charli for prompt and comment. Incidentally, I've just seen this from another site about creativity being born of constraints http://thewritelife.com/dr-seuss/

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Charli Mills link
21/4/2014 02:00:16 pm

That a great article, Ann! It articulates what I discovered about writing cinquains. A friend challenged me to "just try it" despite my protests that I was "not a poet" and I discovered unexpected creativity that came out of the syllabic constraints. It's my hope that by practicing the 99-word constraint with a group of writers, that we all discover first-hand the power of constraint. Thanks!

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Norah Colvin link
22/4/2014 07:30:58 am

Hi Anne, I'm so pleased you joined in the challenge. Bernie's story is a poignant one. It is so sad that she lost her life's purpose when she gave away her child. So many actions and reactions compound a situation with often unforeseen consequences. Her story deserves more telling.

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Annecdotist
22/4/2014 10:48:51 am

Thanks Charli and Norah for your encouragement and support.
I confess I had to look up what a cinquain was, but I like it, good to have that discipline of rhythm, which I always feel is important even if I don't quite manage it.
Hope to do more work on Bernie over the coming months.
Glad I've joined in, what's next?

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Susan Budig link
22/4/2014 10:11:52 pm

I liked several of your word-choices. "Surrendered" rather than "give-up" and "Jason has made contact," spare yet wholly adequate.

One of my favorites for this Carrot Ranch challenge.

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Charli Mills link
22/4/2014 10:39:03 pm

Anne and Susan, I'm delighted to see the two of you have connected. Anne, I wouldn't know a lick about poetry if it hadn't been for Susan. And poetry taught me things like selecting the right word. I have an idea for what next tomorrow! Climate change...how we can use environment to shift the tone of a story or the attitude of a character.

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Annecdotist
23/4/2014 10:15:42 am

Thank you, Susan and Charli. I've felt for a long time that going on a poetry course would actually help with my prose fiction, but never taken the plunge. This feels like a good step towards it.
I'm definitely inspired to do a climate change 99- worder if I have the time before next week.

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Charli Mills link
23/4/2014 04:43:47 pm

Mary Oliver wrote, "A Poetry Handbook--A Prose Guide to Understanding and Writing Poetry."

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Annecdotist
24/4/2014 10:08:56 am

Thanks, Charli, sounds just up my street!

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