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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Games in the schoolyard: New Boy by Tracy Chevalier

11/6/2017

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Dee is excited when she spots the new boy in the playground. The son of a Ghanaian diplomat, Osei Kokote is the only black child in the school. When their class teacher entrusts her to show him around, their friendship develops an intensity that takes everyone by surprise. But bully boy Ian can’t let that happen. He rules the playground. He knows how to split the couple apart.

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The latest contribution to the Hogarth Shakespeare series, New Boy will inevitably be judged both on its own merits and its capacity to extend our understanding of the play on which it’s based. As it happens, I was studying Othello around the time Tracy Chevalier’s imagined younger kids were sizing each other up. I’d never been quite convinced about the gullibility of Shakespeare’s noble soldier, so it seemed an inspired choice for Tracy Chevalier to set her version amid the petty jealousies of the schoolyard. However, I wondered in advance how effective this would be for a story of transracial sex. Yet these American eleven-year-olds on the cusp of puberty, perhaps a year ahead of me and my schoolmates in the UK, just beginning to pair off (with that wonderful term, which I’d long forgotten, going with as in Will you go with me?) and break up equally suddenly, do nothing more daring than kissing with tongues, captures the atmosphere perfectly.

The blatant racism of the 1970s, among the teachers as much as the students, comes across as rather shocking to the contemporary reader. But these were the days in which the play would be performed with a white actor blacking up. Yet, although an authentic portrayal of the era, I would have preferred more subtlety. Even Shakespeare is able to show the hypocrisy in which Othello’s race is irrelevant when he remains within prescribed boundaries, but suddenly offensive when he wants to marry a white man’s daughter. Tracy Chevalier’s Osei is more knowing than Othello as, privy to his thoughts, it’s clear he is aware that his acceptance can only be provisional. But Shakespeare’s far more arrogant Othello gives us the tragedy of a great man brought low by his blindness to his own vulnerability.

For another school-set story about children of a similar age, see my review of
The Teacher’s Secret.

My copy arrived from publishers Vintage around the time Irene Waters posted June’s Times Past memoir prompt. After my rather depressing memory of weather, for May, I might not have had much to say about the schoolyard if I hadn’t been struck by how different Irene’s experience, in the heat of Australia, had been to mine.

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Before I get to that, let me share some fictional schoolyard memories from my novels. Firstly, here’s Steve, narrator my second novel, Underneath, having his illusions shattered by his more sophisticated female classmates (p50-51):
In the playground, we’ve divided into two teams, but what’s at stake is far more important than who’s first to kick the ball between the goalposts.

Who brings your presents, then? says Jason Silcott.

Linking arms, three girls chorus: It’s your mum and dad, stupid!


Daniel Clitheroe stamps his foot: How would your mum and dad know what you want?


Can’t they read? comes the retort. They look at the letter you write to Santa.


I’ve seen him with my own eyes, says a smelly boy with thick glasses and warts.


Howls of laughter: It’s your daddy dressed up.


My skin prickles with the promise of defeat. We’ve got the wrong people on our side, that’s the problem. Not enough girls.


Jason Silcott does five perfect hops. What about the carrot I put out for Rudolph?

Your mum cooks it with your Christmas dinner next day.


I’m all wriggly like when I need the toilet and Miss Fothergill says I have to wait till break. If only I dared snatch the argument, I’d surely kick it straight into goal.


It’s a story for kids, says a girl with Goldilocks hair fastened in a floppy pink bow.


Her friends pretend to yawn, and turn away. Across the yard, Miss Fothergill raises the brass bell. My voice sounds muffled under the hood of my parka, but I know it’s reached them, because they stop and stare.


Michael Foster says: Who asked your opinion?


He says something else, but those words are lost in the clanking of the bell.

(For more about the child narrator in Underneath, see this post from the blog tour The Child in the Clothes of the Criminal).


In
my debut novel, Sugar and Snails, Diana’s memory of the schoolyard is of a different kind of disillusionment, expressed in conflict with her mother (p41-42):

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So many times I’d stood with my mother, my hands clutching the bars of the rusting gate, gazing across the yard at the slate-grey schoolhouse, longing for the day I could take my place inside. Twin stone staircases led to a heavy wooden door, the numbers 1873 embossed above it, as grand as the entrance to a castle. At school I’d learn to read, and never have to go without a story. I’d glide up those steps like a fairy tale princess, entering one day by the left side, the next by the right.

All my hopes that school would widen my horizons caved in on me. I didn’t understand that the letters above the stairs spelt out BOYS on one side and GIRLS on the other. That my mother would laugh, then plead, then slap me hard on the legs and carry me up like a sack of coal when I tried to go up the wrong one.

Neither of these is based on my own experience, but there’s a tiny fragment casually voiced by a minor character in Sugar and Snails that is. When Paul, the husband of Diana’s best friend Venus, says (p74):

at my school the girls were kept indoors, sewing pincushions when the boys were out in the yard playing football


he might have been referring to me and my friends, except that we weren’t even making pincushions – which, let’s face it, might have been of some, albeit limited, use – but soft toys made of felt and stuffed with kapok. Let me tell you a little more about that.

On Wednesday afternoons Mr Thompson took the boys at the yard to play football, while the headmistress, a rather scary nun, kept the girls at our desks doing needlework. Although neither sporty nor rebellious, I felt the injustice of this especially as, in the first year at that junior school, the boys had been compelled to embroider “dressing table sets” with cross stitch along with the girls. I wondered, along with my friends, what would happen if we “forgot” to bring our needlework one week. Sure enough, as we’d hoped, without the felt and thread for our giraffes, we were banished into the yard with the boys.


Despite this uninspiring introduction, I became quite adept at needlework in my 20s, making some of my own clothes until it became cheaper to buy them. And I’m sure Sister Eta would be pleased to know that I never developed an interest in football.


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Apologies for the length of this post, but I’d reached what I thought was the end when the call came from Charli Mills for 99-word stories involving an outdoor game. Other Rough Writers might be more familiar with the games of kickball and double dutch played in Tracy Chevalier’s schoolyard in Washington DC. After a previous Times Past memoir prompt (on crazes) took me to an outdoor game at home, I’ve looked for renewed inspiration elsewhere:

Remembering Kabaddi

Ram often dreamt he was a child again, running barefoot across the dusty earth. Amid the singsong voices of the staff, he often felt a child, unable to dress, wash or eat without assistance. But never before had he been led to believe he’d been transported back to childhood, his playmates’ chants ringing in his ears: Kabaddi, kabaddi, kabaddi …

He opened his eyes. The care staff considered the sports channel invigorating, but Ram wasn’t interested in cricket, rugby: English games. Now TV had stolen his memories, his village roots, taming the ancient game with a court and referee.

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Norah Colvin link
13/6/2017 08:06:17 am

What a rich and fascinating post, Anne, including links to a few others I hadn't yet read. I must admit that I was never a great fan of Shakespeare. I found him difficult to read, though we spent hours in school deciphering and performing. I quite like the sound New Boy. It sounds as if it is an easier, and more enjoyable, read. I enjoyed the post about writing in a child's voice. I think you got it just right. It was believable to me. I went to an all-girls' school so had no idea what the boys were doing. We did do some sports at school though. But they were girls' versions of the boys' games - like vigaro and netball. I was never one much for needlepoint either, though did some knitting and crochet in younger days.
Your flash is very sad, but well written and told, as always. When memories are few, it's sad to have those ones erased too.

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Annecdotist
14/6/2017 10:30:55 am

Thank you, Norah, and I think you’d like New Boy although, just as with Shakespeare, there were some cultural references I didn’t get.
Thanks for reading my post about the child’s voice and I’m glad you think it worked in Underneath.
Yeah, isn’t it weird that girls would play adapted versions of boys games, which I never questioned at the time. Never come across vigaro – will have to search engine it.

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Deborah Lee link
13/6/2017 02:06:52 pm

Sometimes structure is a good thing, but we need to let go of it, too. Adult games are usually too structured, I find. ;-)

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Annecdotist
14/6/2017 10:33:40 am

Maybe the rules contribute to how seriously it’s taken and, as a substitute for war, that’s no bad thing :-)

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Liz Hartmann link
13/6/2017 03:45:22 pm

I love the Hogarth series! Thanks for the head's up--request going in to my library queue right now~~

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Annecdotist
14/6/2017 10:34:58 am

The series is great, isn’t it, Liz. Hope you enjoy this one.

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Irene Waters link
17/6/2017 09:16:45 am

Tracy Chevalier's new novel sounds interesting and a change from her normal genre. I would certainly be tempted to read it although I have struggled with most modern day versions of Shakespeare that I have seen on the stage, preferring Shakespeare's take and language.
You are brave Anne writing in a 9 year old boys voice. It sounded good to me and believable but not having been a boy and not knowing any boys of that age with which to compare it I wouldn't have a clue at its authenticity. What I have realised when I write in a child's voice is that the writing is much more to do with simple emotion lacking in outside perspectives but perhaps that is the story I am writing.
Thanks for joining in again and adding your experiences to the mix. We too had to do sewing but at the same time the boys did woodwork. I was incredibly jealous of the elephant my brother carved out of balsa wood. I don't think that I ever finished any sewing piece and was usually found sent outside to stand reflecting on my sins. We did have sport where the girls played separately from the boys - we with soft ball and basketball, the boys with cricket and football. Your flash is wonderful though sad. Loss of memories to my mind is loss of identity.

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Annecdotist
20/6/2017 05:10:10 pm

Thanks, Irene, although little Steve is meant to be about six or seven. I don’t think there’s a great deal of difference at that age between boys and girls – although the kids themselves think so and keep to their own tribes.
I actually took woodwork at secondary school from age 13 or so and made a donkey, though not much else! The teacher wasn’t so keen on having girls in the class and let us sit around gossiping, which of course we loved but didn’t learn an awful lot. Years later I went to an evening class in woodwork and made a coffee table and a double bed which, at least thirty years on, we’ve only just replaced. Sounds impressive, but I had a lot of input from the teacher, and I’m still not at all practical.

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