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I started this blog in 2013 to share my reflections on reading, writing and psychology, along with my journey to become a published novelist.​  I soon graduated to about twenty book reviews a month and a weekly 99-word story. Ten years later, I've transferred my writing / publication updates to my new website but will continue here with occasional reviews and flash fiction pieces, and maybe the odd personal post.

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Hotels of North America by Rick Moody & Thomas and Mary by Tim Parks

14/4/2016

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The protagonists of novels are often called upon to act more heroically than they might have to in real life. So it can be refreshing to come across main characters who are as ordinary as the rest of us. Here I’m reviewing two novels about the loves and limitations of middle-aged men; the first in America and the second in the UK. Do these characters have enough oomph to keep our interest? Read on for my personal view. (And, for another take on masculinity and compromised morality, see my review of The Faithful Couple.)

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Since there’s no such thing as a totally objective observer, reviews, whether of books, boots or B&Bs, will inevitably reveal something of the reviewer as well as the object or experience under review. So, in structuring his novel about identity and intimacy as a collection of hotel reviews across the lifespan of a middle-aged man, Rick Moody has hit on an intriguing model for his latest book. Reginald Edward Morse’s posts are more existential essays than straight reviews, although he does adhere to a star rating, usually in the ones and twos. Through these, we catch glimpses of his marriage and relationships, his work as a motivational speaker, and his sadness at his lack of contact with his child, against the backdrop of bedrooms, breakfasts and beds. (And who hasn’t ever squirmed at the thought of previous occupants’ crusted body fluids lingering on the counterpane.)

While I enjoyed meeting Reg through a series of hotel rooms, this novel, as with some hotels have stayed in, didn’t deliver as much as I’d hoped. It wasn’t quite funny enough, nor was the narrator’s character quite wackily self-regarding enough, nor his life quite interesting or tragic enough, to be The Accidental Tourist (my all-time favourite Anne Tyler novel) of the digital age. The afterword by Rick Moody, detailing his failed attempts to track down the author of the reviews with the self-conscious pretence this is not fiction added nothing to my reading experience. Nevertheless a pleasant enough read. Thanks to Serpent’s Tail for my review copy.

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Thomas and Mary got together as students but now, two children and a dog later, their marriage is falling apart. As in Hot Milk, the symbolism is writ large from the first chapter when Thomas loses his wedding ring on the beach. There follows a chapter on uncoordinated bedtimes guaranteed to make anyone who’s ever been in a long-term relationship cringe. The forensic examination of the small pleasures (actually, not very many by this stage of the relationship) and multiple irritations that make up a shared life provides the humour of this novel, the struggle to commit to either the marriage or separation its poignancy.

Thomas in particular is an indecisive fellow, fraught with guilt at his continual affairs but somehow unable to take full responsibility for his actions. I was totally convinced by the chapter on his vicarage childhood, with his attempts not to disappoint his parents as his older siblings have done (his sister with her poor academic record, his brother with his rejection of the church) severely restricting his psychological growth resulting in a false self.

I had mixed feelings about the couple therapy and references to his analyst – although, to be fair, my standards are somewhat exacting – but decided that the chapter “Shrink” qualifies the novel as number 23 in my series on fictional therapists. I enjoyed the dialogue between client and therapist, progressing from Thomas’s resentment at the Christmas break to some kind of epiphany, despite the therapist’s unprofessional chain-smoking (reminding me of a photograph of the famous psychoanalyst Hanna Segal, which unfortunately I can’t find online). I thought Tim Parks wise to avoid complicated professional distinctions by referring to her by the slang generic term “shrink”, but was disappointed that he had her ending the session by inviting Thomas to call her before next week’s meeting should he need to (p322). (Lots of readers and reviewers were disappointed when this wasn’t offered by the analyst in Hausfrau, but in my view her failure lay in not arranging alternative crisis care.)

My main criticism of Thomas and Mary is that it seems unfinished: not that there isn’t an adequate ending, but that the author hasn’t made up his mind what he wants the focus of the novel to be. While mostly related from Thomas’s point of view, albeit jumping arbitrarily from third to first person, we do see things from other perspectives. Surprisingly, given the title, Mary’s voice is missing: the one chapter which looks as if it’s her story turns out to be Thomas’s attempt to get inside her head. Yet if, alternatively, the aim of the novel is to present the modern marriage in a broad context, we need more point-of-view characters: for example, we are shown virtually nothing of what their daughter, Sally, thinks of it all. In fact, the only female character drawn in three-dimensions is Thomas’s dying mother. However, if it’s intended as Thomas’s story, which is how I read it, little would be lost by cutting those scenes shown through others’ eyes. (I found the chapter from Mary’s dog-walking friend, Julie, almost unreadable.) Although Thomas and Mary isn’t overly long, a shorter novel would have been stronger: although Thomas, despite his flaws, had my sympathy initially, I did find myself wishing he would get his act together long before the last page.

Tim Parks is the author of sixteen previous novels and ten books of non-fiction. I think there are echoes of his memoir Teach Us to Sit Still (I haven’t read it, but I’ve read a lot about it) in a later chapter exploring what it means to concentrate on music. I first came across him in the powerful novel Cleaver, and eagerly sought out his other works, loving Dreams of Rivers and Seas and being bored to death by Europa. Thomas and Mary, to my mind, wasn’t as good as the former or as bad as the latter. Thanks to Harvill Secker for providing my review copy.
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Sarah
14/4/2016 09:47:29 pm

Of course characters are heroic if need be for the story. But they are often flawed, which is nice. This seems different though and, like you said, it's "refreshing to come across main characters who are as ordinary as the rest of us." :-)

Eew. The way you described hotel room beds. *gag* Let's move on. That first book seem to be confusing. In a completely different way, the second one seems confusing as well. I was intrigued at first by Thomas & Mary but now am unsure if I'd like either.

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Annecdotist
15/4/2016 09:25:13 am

Eew, indeed, Sarah. But I didn't find either of them confusing, just that the structure distanced me somewhat from the characters. In Hotels, I found I could enjoy the novel FOR its structure, but in Thomas it really got in the way.

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Norah Colvin link
17/4/2016 11:37:55 am

Thanks for these reviews, Anne. I don't think I find either compelling enough to put on my list. (Perhaps if I had more time.) I was interested to read your comment about Rick Moody's supposed attempt at tracking down the author of the reviews. I think we've had a previous discussion about the place of truth in fiction. This seems superfluous to the novel's requirements. Interesting reviews though, particularly when you say that sometimes the reviews reveal more about the reviewer than what's being reviewed!

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Annecdotist
17/4/2016 06:04:07 pm

Thanks, Norah, and yes this is something that crops up quite a lot, and it’s in my list of irritating things that make me tempted to stop reading. And it’s true, since what we take from a book is very personal, we must be revealing something of ourselves when we pass that on to others.

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