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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
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Learning from 7 debut novelists about character motivation

16/10/2013

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How do you maintain your readers’ investment in your story, keep them rooting for your characters right through to the end? As Juliet O’Callaghan outlined in a blog post a few months ago, teachers of creative writing tell us it’s all down to motivation. The writer’s task is to clarify right from the start what the protagonist wants and devise credible ways of stopping them from getting it until almost the last page. 

While I can see how this can create tension, I’ve always had a problem applying this “rule” to my writing. My characters refuse to sum up what they’re aiming for in a neat sound-bite and, if they do, they shoot off in the opposite direction a couple of chapters later. I could try reining them in, but they’d only start complaining that I was the one who invited them to act as if they were as quirky and contradictory as real people. 

In real life, our goals are often fuzzy, especially regarding the things that matter most, and, even if we think we know what we want, we’re often quite haphazard in the way we try to achieve it. Who can show me how to take my characters along an obstacle course that will satisfy the reader without compromising on the complexity of human motivation? It turns out there are some excellent models in the novels I’ve been reading for my interviews with debut authors.
 

Let’s start with Alys, Always, the foundation for my latest Q&A with author Harriet Lane. What Frances wants is uncertain at the beginning and is gradually shaped by circumstance.  Later, when she develops her plan, the details are withheld from the reader. The tension arises, not from following her along a clear path, but from wondering exactly where she’s heading and how far she’s prepared to go. Here’s what the author told me about this apparent subversion of the motivation ideal:
A reader generally comes to a novel -- especially a novel with a first-person narrative -- presuming that he or she is in ‘safe hands’. You take a lot for granted, and I thought it would be fun to explore that assumption.                                                                   Harriet Lane. 
Frances isn’t the only narrator who plays her cards close to her chest.  Grace, the heroine of The Lifeboat, is fighting for her survival; in her efforts to engage the sympathy, not just of the reader, but of those who might influence her fate, truth and openness aren’t her main priority.

Satish, the central character of Jubilee, also has secrets, but these stem from fear and shame rather than an attempt to manipulate. Yet what he wants is clear enough, although I’m not sure it meets the 'proper' criteria if a character wants something not to happen. But it works: we keep reading to discover why he doesn’t want to go to the reunion party and whether he will be able to avoid it.

If Satish is an example of negative motivation, Futh, the main character in The Lighthouse, serves to demonstrate how non-motivation can be effective. Although ostensibly driven to complete his walking tour, he’s someone who is more acted upon than active, consumed by the sadness of his childhood:
He isn’t really capable of leaving the past and the damage behind                                                                            Alison Moore
Yet we still warm to him and want things to work out for him, even if we can’t be explicit about what form that “working out” might take. 

I presume it’s his vulnerability that helps us tolerate his lack of direction. Yet a vulnerable narrator needn’t lack of direction. In Harmattan, it’s perfectly clear that twelve-year-old Haoua wants to continue her education. Yet this isn’t a story of will-she won’t-she achieve the goal of a school place, but of how bad things can get when that most ordinary of experiences is taken from her. Witnessing the attack on all that was good in her life, the reader shares the outrage that motivated Gavin Weston to begin the novel.

The other child narrator, five-year-old Pea, heroine of The Night Rainbow, can also tell us what she wants, setting out on a quest to make her mother happy. But how can the adult reader align herself with this desire in the knowledge that what really ought to happen is for the mother to get out of bed and recognise she has a living child to care for? Heavily pregnant following a stillbirth and having recently lost her husband, Maman is not unsympathetic. Like for Satish and Futh, there’s a generalised wish that the bad stuff hasn’t happened and the forward motion comes from hoping everyone will find a way through.

Finally, in The Banner of the Passing Clouds, the novel at the centre of my next author interview, Iosif strives to be loyal both to his family and to the state. With Stalin having taken up residence inside his body, these turn out to be contradictory ideals, pulling him in different directions.

Thus, in every one of these debut novels the main character’s motivation is less straightforward than the creative writing gurus would have us believe. Yet they are each, in their different ways, a gripping read. Goals can be vague, contradictory, withheld, unknown or denied; a character can be
motivated to avoid an outcome or to work towards the wrong thing. Motivation can be projected into the reader, so that we want to climb inside that fictional world and fix the problem.
 
Mixed-up motivation works well for me as a reader, how about you?
Thanks for reading. I'd love to know what you think. If you've enjoyed this post, you might like to sign up via the sidebar for regular email updates and/or my quarterly Newsletter.
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Laila Blake link
16/10/2013 03:42:00 am

I really have to agree with you. Like with many writing "rules" i feel like they are only valid for certain genres or circumstances.

This one especially is baffling to me. It makes sense in a murder mystery: the cop wants find the killer, and it works in a lot of adventures, too. Meg Murry wants her father to come home etc. But I think in a lot of stories, it's far more interesting to learn how the character developed that motivation, because like most of us, they start out not really having any.

I read Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie's novel Purple Hibiscus last week, and her main character had no motivation because she was raised to believe she wasn't allowed to want anything. She doesn't even clearly want to get out of her really difficult situation. Life is complex and novels should reflect that :).

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Carlie Lee link
16/10/2013 03:00:18 pm

I'm agreeing with both of you - although as a reader I'm never conscious of a character's motivation - I only ever feel it, really, if it's missing, and then (usually) I grow bored. I don't know how I'd manage the 'Purple Hibiscus' - did the lack of motivation interfere with your level of interest, or did you find yourself adopting motivation on the protagonist's behalf?

And Anne - thank you for prodding my brain into action on a rainy Wednesday eve!

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Juliet
17/10/2013 12:54:13 pm

This a great post Anne. Frances in Alys Always is a great example of a character that at the start doesn't appear to want anything, but by the end is driven by such obsession you believe she will do anything to achieve it (which is what makes the novel so unputdownable). I agree motivation should not be straightforward, but even not wanting anything to happen is compelling because as the reader you know that will not be possible and therefore the character will have to react to events (even if she doesn't instigate them). I agree with Carlie that motivation has to be there, but it doesn't need to be obvious or straightforward. Really enjoyed this post and it has made me think about my characters motivations in a new and fresh way. Thanks.

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Annecdotist
18/10/2013 04:44:03 am

Thanks so much Laila, Carlie and Juliet for your thoughtful reflections on my post. You’ve really helped deepen my thinking about motivation.
It’s a while since I’ve read Purple Hibiscus, so thanks for the reminder Laila of a powerful story. I really got the girl’s sense of not knowing how to want something because of how she’d been brought up and I’d love to think I could recreate that in my own writing. I’d be really interested in whether or not you’d enjoy it, Carlie – whether the context, which is so beautifully articulated, would compensate for her lack of drive or whether you’d be frustrated. Because, after all, as readers, we look for different things. I’ve had a bit of a chat on Twitter this morning about another novel, Almost English, where a main character’s lack of agency doesn’t work for me, and I’m wondering what makes the difference. (You could even catch up with this in the Twitter sidebar.)
And, Juliet, you’re absolutely right that motivation HAS to be taken into account but there’s a lot of flexibility as to how we might do it. I might have been too wrapped up in fighting against what can sometimes appear like holy writ to develop my confidence in the stance I’m taking in relation to it. All three comments have helped me (possibly) to nail the motivation of the main character in my novel: she’s taken a huge step in an area where I think readers would assume she must have desperately wanted it, but I’m wanting to leave the reader with more of a sense of her ambivalence. (Rather clumsily put, but I’m getting there.)
I’m wondering if this is somewhere it’s quite easy to be thrown by feedback – but if you know as a writer what you’re doing with the motivation (even if, especially if, you’re withholding it) it gives you something to hang on to.
Thanks all for reading such a lengthy post and sharing your stimulating reflections about it. Fabulous to have your feedback.

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