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I started this blog in 2013 to share my reflections on reading, writing and psychology, along with my journey to become a published novelist.​  I soon graduated to about twenty book reviews a month and a weekly 99-word story. Ten years later, I've transferred my writing / publication updates to my new website but will continue here with occasional reviews and flash fiction pieces, and maybe the odd personal post.

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Murder and morality: The Forged Coupon, An Untouched House & Smoking Kills

3/7/2018

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Three translations came my way recently, each of which considers crime in a moral context. The two novellas are the work of now deceased European authors while the short novel comes from a contemporary writer. While one is a comedy and the others deadly (pun intended) serious, they collectively address the causes and consequences of the ultimate crime. In one, it begins as an accident and becomes an addiction; in another, it’s endemic in the destructive forces released through war; in the third, it’s the end result in a chain of selfish actions. While one ends in pessimism and another brings hope and redemption, in a third, the narrator gets what he wants in an unexpected way. I’m not saying which is which, but listing my reviews in the order I read them. I wonder which you would prefer.


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Smoking Kills by Antoine Laurain translated by Louise Lalaurie Rogers

Can an ordinary man become addicted to murder? That’s what seems to happen to Parisian Fabrice Valantine, senior executive at a headhunting company, father of a rebellious adolescent and husband of a curator of modern art, in this quirky novel, first published ten years ago in France.
 
His first murder is an accident, born of self-defence, but when it returns his lost pleasures, he knows it won’t be his last. Although the subsequent three are intentional, creatively planned and lovingly executed, they’re all justified, at least in Fabrice’s mind.
 
 
I wasn’t sure I’d get round to reading this comic novel, as I consider the topic no laughing matter – and I don’t mean murder, but the harm tobacco brings. Then I wondered how far I’d get into this review before mentioning smoking, the supposed root of the narrator’s crimes. But I must have thawed by page 68 when his description of how he learned to inhale raised a smile and I came to appreciate the story more once he’d dispensed with his smoking history and moved on to his crimes.
 
 
 
Does it have a happy ending? (A question I’m often asked by potential purchasers of my second novel,
Underneath, which also has a criminal narrator.) The ending of Smoking Kills is extremely satisfying. I just wish it wasn’t so much about smoking. Thanks to Gallic books for my advance proof copy.

An Untouched House by Willem Frederik Hermans translated by David Colmer

A battle-weary partisan fighting with the Red Army against the Nazis comes across a palatial house, seemingly recently abandoned yet barely touched by the war. Hardly believing his luck, he moves in, relishing the abundant hot water, clean clothes, a soft bed and a pan of soup warming on the stove. When the Germans arrive, wanting to use it as a billet, he poses as the owner and welcomes them in.
 
When the man of the house turns up some time later and, shortly after that, his wife, the narrator is unwilling to give up his comfortable retreat. But in his manner of despatching the civilians, he’s already brought the war into the house. Nevertheless the fabric of the building remains sacrosanct, until the territory changes hands and the partisans bring further destruction inside.
 
First published in 1951 in the original Dutch and now appearing in English translation courtesy of Pushkin Press, An Untouched House is short even for a novella, but that doesn’t mean it’s not profound. Initially, it seemed to read like a fairytale, and I wondered if the narrator was actually dead or dreaming of such luxury. I changed my mind as he began to foul his refuge when it became an immorality tale – or perhaps an amorality tale – about the chaos and absurdity of war. Thanks to publishers for my advance proof copy.

The Forged Coupon by Leo Tolstoy translated by Hugh Alpin

When the governor criticises one of his employees, he could have no idea he’s started a chain of events that will lead to madness and murder. But Fyodor Mikhailovich returns home from work in a foul mood, which deteriorates further when his fifteen-year-old son requests an advance on his allowance. Grudgingly, he doles out the boy’s usual three roubles, partly in cash and partly in the form of a coupon redeemable in local shops.
 
In debt to his friends, and encouraged by an older boy, the schoolboy fraudulently adds an extra digit to the value of the coupon to get the ten extra roubles he needs. The myopic shopkeeper who receives it is castigated by her husband, although that doesn’t prevent him from passing on the forged coupon to a peddler of firewood.
 
And so it goes on, each betrayal leading to another, although the offending coupon itself is soon withdrawn from circulation. Beatings, unfair dismissal, theft and murder, all without much thought for the victims. Until the last words of a virtuous woman haunt her murderer, sending him temporarily insane. But that’s when he’s open to the message of the Christian gospels of forgiveness, generosity and treating others as one would wish to be treated oneself. And the road to redemption begins.
 
The story is simply told, without the lengthy digressions and descriptions one might expect from Tolstoy. But there’s no need for moralising paragraphs when the overall message is so clear. Bad deeds breed resentment and further misdemeanours, which have a negative effect on society as a whole. But the domino effect also works in the other direction, with acts of kindness and compassion generating more of the same.
 
With the wide cast of characters encompassing town and country, rich and poor, Tolstoy also warns against looking towards the establishment, both religious and secular, for guidance on how to live the moral life. As an introduction by translator Hugh Alpin, and endnotes from the publisher Alma books (who provided my review copy), make clear, this is consistent with the author’s own worldview, especially towards the end of his life.
 
Which of these accounts of murder within the context of both public and private morality most – or least – appeals to you?

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Charli Mills link
7/7/2018 04:06:26 pm

An interesting group of reviews, Anne!

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