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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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On women’s hair and discrimination: Queenie & The Braid

11/4/2019

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Hot on the heels of The Old Drift, I found myself reading another two debuts about hair. In the first, although I don’t mention it in my review, you can see from the cover image that Queenie has great hair; in the second, the title’s a giveaway. Both novels also address discrimination (albeit not deeply enough for my liking): in the first as experienced by a young black woman in London; in the second it’s the trials of a lower caste woman in rural India condemned to shift shit with her bare hands and a Canadian lawyer hitting a professional brick wall when she gets sick.

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Queenie by Candice Carty-Williams

Twenty-five-year-old Queenie’s life has taken a nosedive, and it’s about to plunge deeper. Her boyfriend has asked her to move out before she’s had a chance to tell him, despite being fitted with a coil, she’s had a miscarriage. For the next few months her life revolves around mourning the end of her relationship, WhatsApp support from her friends when she’s supposed to be working, abusive sex and trips to the sexual health clinic.
 
I’m too old for jokey novels about ditzy young women with non-jobs in the media but, from the mini review in the Guardian at the turn of the year, I thought Queenie would be right up my street:
 
One of the buzziest debuts of the year: a witty comic novel about a young black journalist negotiating love, work and identity in contemporary Britain.
 
Friends, I was disappointed! The protagonist’s road to self-destruction is more disturbing than amusing and the prose – albeit my copy courtesy of publishers Trapeze was an uncorrected proof – reads like an early draft. Although there were nods to Black Lives Matter, the analysis, like Queenie’s work, was rather shallow. Yes, the objectification and fetishization of a black woman on a dating app is painful to read, and the lack of diversity in trendy jobs is a well-known scandal, but a white man (of presumably my generation) jokingly using the n-word in the presence of his nephew’s black girlfriend tells us nothing about the more subtle forms of everyday racism of which white people may be unaware.
 
I felt opportunities were also missed in the psychological formulation of Queenie’s self-hatred. Naturally, I was alert to the foreshadowing of mother issues when Queenie sees other relatives, but her father’s abuse and mother’s neglect comes across as box-ticking.
 
Queenie is referred by the sexual health clinic to a counsellor/therapist. Although Janet has the typical fictional therapist boundary issues (a written promise that she can help her; facilitating emergency phone contact; moving the location of the therapy from the NHS hospital to her own home – admittedly to a space in which she ordinarily sees patients – enabling her to put Queenie to bed when she has a panic attack; divulging personal information), she is helpful. Hurrah! I also welcomed how cross-cultural issues were flagged in Queenie’s Jamaican grandmother’s staunch opposition to the therapy as an admission of weakness. In real life, if the therapy were long enough and the therapist sufficiently skilled, Queenie’s pairing with a white therapist would have given her opportunities to explore her complex attitude to race (for example, in her preference for white partners) through the transference.


The Braid by Laetitia Colombani translated by
Louise Rogers Lalaurie

Smita is determined to save her daughter from the life she’s had, as a Dalit woman collecting rich people’s shit in a village in Uttar Pradesh. Guila is forced to take the reins of her family’s wig-making business in Palermo when her father is seriously injured. Sarah, a highflying Montréal lawyer and single mother of three, finds herself sidelined when she’s treated for cancer. Seemingly worlds apart, these three women’s stories are eventually braided together in a manner that might be intended as uplifting but reinforces the pattern of the wealthy surviving by treading on the toes of the poor.
 
It starts okay, although it’s a little disorientating to be introduced to another main character when you’ve barely got to know the first. I warmed to Smita, especially as she furnished me with another fictional toilet (p4-5):
 
Manual scavenging: a coy term that bears little relation to reality. There are other words to describe what Smita does for a living: she collects other people’s shit, removing it bare-handed from the dry latrines, using only a stiff reed brush and a metal scoop, all day long. She was six years old … when her mother took her along for the first time. Watch, then you will do the same. Smita remembers the smell that assaulted her, sharp and violent as a swarm of wasps, and unbearable, bestial stench. She had vomited on the side of the road. You’ll get used to it, her mother said. She had lied.
 
… And yet the government promised toilets, right across the country. They have not come here … people defecate in the open. The ground is filthy, everywhere: the streams and rivers, the fields, polluted with tons of excrement. Sickness spreads like wildfire. The politicians know it: what people want, before reforms or social equality, are toilets. The right to defecate with dignity. In the villages, many women are forced to wait until nightfall, to go out into the fields, exposing themselves to the risk of attack.
 
While I bristled at the preachy tone, I reminded myself that readers less familiar with India might appreciate the information. But the same telling rather than showing lingers into the emotional climax, which might be partly why I reacted so strongly against the overall message. Yes, we’re all interconnected; I’d prefer the author to acknowledge the exploitation not only within India worldwide.
 
Described as an international bestseller, I received my copy courtesy of British publishers, Picador. If it wasn’t so lauded I might have been more forgiving, but it upset me so much I’ve given it a rare single star.

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Although braids don’t feature in my short story collection, Becoming Someone there are a fair few references to hair and/or its absence. And there’s a Queenie!
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Charli Mills
17/4/2019 04:19:08 am

I often wonder at the disparity between a lauded book and its inability to deliver -- is it an issue of publishers being out of touch with the target market or the reader not being the target audience? Neither sound appealing. Do you think they are brave authors for venturing into difficult topics, and can be forgiven being off the mark? Or the topics are exploited without having real depth to share the experiences in a meaningful way? I find it interesting that the use of n-word is a measure of racism. I agree with you that it's more subtle and many of us are oblivious.

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Anne Goodwin
17/4/2019 05:49:00 pm

Interesting questions, Charli. I’m probably not the target audience for Queenie and, on further reflection, I might not have taken sufficient account of the mix of racism and misogyny directed at young black women. The latter is probably actually worse than in my youth even though we were less enlightened in many ways.
I’ve seen some glowing reviews of Queenie but in my view the author needed more practice hours under her belt before tackling this. I’m not sure that it’s brave since as a young black woman working in publishing there’s a certain overlap with her main character.
I don’t think Braid is a brave attempt either. It’s actually well-written and, as far as I’m able to tell, well researched (although I think she might have muddled a couple of Indian massacres – I can’t find it now to check) but the ending negated all the good stuff that had gone before. It wasn’t so much that it was inaccurate that the Indian woman’s hair was used for the Canadian woman’s vanity – and I imagine I’d do something similar if I went bald – but it was the complacency verging on celebration of this. An acceptance that because the Indian donated her hair for spiritual reasons at the temple it was okay that she didn’t get paid for it and was still going to be downtrodden and poor. Ugh.

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Norah Colvin link
28/4/2019 11:28:33 am

There is so much wrong with our world, Anne. We need more ways to make it right. Perhaps only books that clearly describe all measures of discrimination will be able to do that. We need to be convinced.

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Anne Goodwin
28/4/2019 05:44:55 pm

We do indeed, but I still think the novel's main purpose is to entertain (in the broadest sense).

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Nancy link
3/2/2020 08:05:33 pm

Do you think they are daring creators for wandering into troublesome subjects and can be excused being missing the goal? Or then again the subjects are misused without having genuine profundity to share the encounters in a significant manner? I think that its fascinating that the utilization of the n-word is a proportion of bigotry.

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Anne Goodwin
4/2/2020 03:16:29 pm

I don't think they're daring, but then I read and write a lot about troublesome subjects. Queenie has been highly praised by others, so the author could be said to have hit her goal – I'm probably not the intended reader. The Braid on the other hand seems a continuation of white people's exploitation of people of colour. I found it rather shallow.

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