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I started this blog in 2013 to share my reflections on reading, writing and psychology, along with my journey to become a published novelist.​  I soon graduated to about twenty book reviews a month and a weekly 99-word story. Ten years later, I've transferred my writing / publication updates to my new website but will continue here with occasional reviews and flash fiction pieces, and maybe the odd personal post.

ANNE GOODWIN'S WRITING NEWS

Taking our characters to work

10/9/2018

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If there is one area where struggling-to-be-noticed writers have the advantage over those who’ve been published since they were barely out of school, it’s our inside knowledge of the world of work. Coming to writing later in life, or merely being part of the majority unable to support themselves through writing, we have the experience to bring our characters’ jobs alive. But there can still be challenges in taking our characters to work.

For example, while setting your novel in your current workplace obviates the need for a research trip, you might have to smooth some colleagues’ ruffled feathers once the book is out in the world. From another angle, if you’ve gained your work experience in settings crowded with colleagues, you face the challenge of rendering it authentically without overwhelming the reader with an overabundance of characters.

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For Diana, the narrator of my debut novel, Sugar and Snails, work is one of the keys to her character. Although initially reluctant to write a novel about a psychologist, the more I got to know her, the more appropriate that career became. Someone who, as a child, was unable to fathom how to please her parents and teachers, might well be driven to study what makes people tick. Growing up before psychology was taught in schools, she was introduced to the subject through her own experience of child and adolescent mental health services. A course of aversion therapy (a now obsolete treatment in which unwanted cognitions are paired with noxious stimuli such as electric shocks), rather than putting her off psychology altogether, ignited a fascination with behaviour theory; intensified, perhaps, by the fact that her own treatment was abruptly curtailed.

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I placed Diana in a university with which I was familiar both as a student and external teacher, although I’d never been on the staff. Part of the plot required her to be employed within a large organisation, but it took effort to pare down her relationships to the minimum possible to make the story work. Before the final draft, I needed to cut one friend, a supportive lecturer within her own department who had grown quite fond of, and leave one vulnerable student to stand in for the hundreds Diana would have taught.

It’s different with my possibly third novel, Matilda Windsor Is Coming Home, set in another large institution, a longstay psychiatric hospital in the process of closing down. Although the focus is on one patient, and on one member of staff, I need to show that Matty lives on a ward alongside others, and that Janice works as part of a team.


With two hospital settings in my second novel, Underneath, there are no prizes for guessing where I’ve spent most of my working life! But I’m indebted to my husband for the narrator Steve’s work, in a general hospital, while his partner Liesel’s, in a forensic mental health setting, is loosely based on somewhere I know only indirectly through attending meetings there.

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With identity the theme of my forthcoming short story collection, Becoming Someone, I’ve taken my characters to work there too. I can reassure you that, although there are several vulnerable and sickly characters, I’ve broken beyond the bounds of hospitals in these stories, with a shop, a nature reserve and a mediaeval nunnery among the work settings. Alongside a medical doctor and an academic, you’ll have the chance to meet a retired administrator, a photojournalist, an estate agent, a gigolo, a beautician, a travel agent and a miner’s widow. Whether I know enough about those areas to make them part of the character’s identity is for readers to decide.
 
What’s your experience of reading or writing about people at work? You can find most of my reviews of novels showing characters in a fictional workplace, via
this link.

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This week, Charli Mills is calling for 99-word stories
about an epic workplace. Although this isn’t the sense in which she meant it, given my recent wrangling with the hero’s journey story structure, I couldn’t resist playing with the idea of working for a company that manufactures elixir:

The call

Bile stinging her throat, she pressed the green icon.

“Homer here.” His tone gave nothing away.

“Thanks for …” Her whole future in that pause.

“Congratulations!”

Joy of joys! She didn’t need to hear more. But was she up to it? Could she bear to uproot herself and begin again somewhere new? “Sorry, I’ll have to turn it down.”

“Excellent!”

Excellent? They didn’t want her after all? She reran his offer in her head: I’m calling to invite you on the adventure of working with us. Of course: to earn the elixir, an employee must first reject the call.
 

Thanks for reading. I'd love to know what you think. If you've enjoyed this post, you might like to sign up via the sidebar for regular email updates and/or my quarterly Newsletter.
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Norah Colvin link
12/9/2018 06:57:36 am

I'm always interested to hear about your writing process, Anne, and where you get your ideas. Workplaces can be rather rich with characters and situations, though most of my working life has been in one situation.
An elixir! I don't think she liked it much and it seems a rather strange initiation routine for a new job. I can understand why she'd be indecisive and confused.
I'm very much looking forward to your two new books.

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Annecdotist
12/9/2018 04:00:14 pm

Thanks, Norah, my flash was a bit silly, but I couldn’t resist!

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Charli Mills link
13/9/2018 07:00:18 am

One of the most enriching research adventures I've had was attending archeology school and getting to interview archeologists. I had longed to be one -- now I can write about one. I've found all your work settings to be believable, which is the ultimate goal. I'm most curious about the gigilo in your upcoming collection. Any research there? Oh, your flash is brilliant! Yes, the hero must reject the call!

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Annecdotist
14/9/2018 01:14:02 pm

Thank you, Charli. Glad you liked my cheeky flash – see how the hero’s journey has got under my skin! It’s great being a writer and having the opportunity to vicariously explore so many possible alternative careers. I hope yours as an archaeologist proves fruitful.

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Derbhile Graham link
28/10/2018 10:28:46 am

A character's work can add a fascinating dimension to a story. It adds that rich, everyday detail that makes a story compelling. Good luck with your short story collection.

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Annecdotist
29/10/2018 03:51:24 pm

Thanks, Derbhile, and glad you agree on the value of fictional work :-)

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