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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Teenage fugitives: The Shepherd’s Hut & Sal

6/7/2018

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When teenagers flee the family home to fend for themselves, they swap one kind of brutality for another. And while their troubled lives will have forced them to develop survival skills in some areas, they are often more vulnerable than their peers in others, such as emotional literacy. But real-life tragedy can make engrossing fiction as you’ll find if you let the young narrators of these two novels lead you into the wilderness: Jaxie in Western Australia and Sal and her younger sister in Scotland. For real-life youth homelessness, mostly in urban areas, Centrepoint (in the UK) is worth supporting.


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The Shepherd’s Hut by Tim Winton

Jaxie Clackton has always had to fight for himself; unfortunately, his dad – a.k.a. Captain Wankbag – has always proved the better fighter. When cancer takes his mother, it feels to Jaxie that the wrong parent has died, while his teachers have given up on him and he’s given up on school. The only person who seems to understand him is Lee, and she’s several hours’ drive away – and, besides, the teenagers don’t have access to a car.
 

Jaxie’s always dreamt of running away with her. It’s just he never expected to have to leave in such a hurry. Setting out to cross the saltlands of Western Australia on foot, he might be more prepared than most. But he’s still likely to run out of food and water before he’s even halfway to where Lee lives.
 
As his luck turns good, then bad, then good, and bad again, Jaxie’s on a real
hero’s journey of survival, in which he must learn to embrace his vulnerability as well as his strength. Although it took me a little while for the young narrator to win me over, I found Tim Winton’s tenth novel for adults a poignant coming-of-age story about domestic violence, intergenerational friendship, religion and teenage love.
 
As with much of this author’s fiction – see
my review of his previous novel, Eyrie – it’s also about masculinity and trust. Thanks to Picador for my review copy.

Sal by Mick Kitson

Thirteen-year-old Sal is a typical parental child: having quickly recognised her mother’s failings, she parents herself, and her ten-year-old sister, Peppa, too. Both girls’ fathers have long been off the scene when Robert moves into the flat, making Sal’s life bleaker still. He actively enables their mother’s addiction to alcohol and sexually abuses Sal. But it’s only when he threatens doing the same to Peppa that she feels compelled to act.
 
True to type, she sees no point confiding in her teachers. Although well aware that Robert’s behaviour is criminal, she fears reporting him will result in separation from her sister if the sisters were taken into care. So, after a year’s preparation, including watching numerous videos on YouTube, she kills Robert and sets off with her sister for the Galloway forest.
 
Extremely practical, Sal is much better equipped to survive in the wilderness than I would be (although I could have given her a lesson in pacing as a navigation technique). And fortunately Peppa has a cheerful disposition, is devoted to her sister and up for adventure. Of course, they haven’t been able to plan for all eventualities but, when the worst happens, luck takes over in the form of a hippy survivalist with an interesting back story of her own.
 
Teacher and former journalist Mick Kitson’s debut novel is probably as optimistic a take on teenage runaways, childhood neglect and sexual abuse as it’s possible to get. I agree with some Goodreads reviewers who have categorised it as YA, although I didn’t notice it flagged this way on the publisher’s website. (That’s not a complaint, although I do feel the real life outcome would have been darker.) Thanks to Canongate for my review copy.
For other novels about survival in extremis see
Anna, Gold, Fame, Citrus and Station Eleven.

The hero’s journey and survival narratives

Although I referred to the hero’s journey story structure in my review of The Shepherd’s Hut, I’d completely forgotten this when, less than a week later, I read Charli’s latest post extolling its virtues. And, despite having declared recently how I’m becoming a convert, I bristled. Something about that model still rankles.
 
As
Charli mentions in her post, some people struggle with the term “hero” – count me in on that! My tatty 1985 Collins Concise refers to a man (but I won’t get distracted by the gender cock up) distinguished by exceptional courage or who is idealised for such by others. Of course it can be used more broadly – and often is, especially in relation to the military – to include people forced by circumstances to behave as if they are brave and noble, but I’m a little uncomfortable with this.
 
The teenage narrators of both The Shepherd’s Hut and Sal begin the journey in classic hero style, with a call to action they reject. They’ve both considered leaving their abusive families several times before embarking on their journeys, but was it really heroic to leave? Of course it was hard, but it would also have been hard to stay. They weren’t choosing adventure over safety, but the lesser of two evils. Their lives were already shit.
 
While my head’s buzzing with thoughts about this right now, I’m going to leave them for another post. But I’m excited to think I’m getting to the roots of my ambivalence towards the hero’s journey story structure and possibly moving towards how I’d amend it to better reflect
my own personal truth.

And so to this week’s flash fiction prompt. While Charli has managed a neat segue from buttons to the hero’s journey and back again, I can’t see a link to these novels about teenage fugitives. So I’m taking my 99-word story from what I hope will be third novel, Matilda Windsor Is Coming Home, in which the same incident sends the three point of view characters into their separate “caves”. In its current incarnation “button” appears twenty-three times, seven of which are in the scene I’ve condensed here.

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Tilly’s parting gift

Finding the button in the drawer, Henry was six again. He licked the grooves, but he couldn’t taste her. He sniffed the Bakelite, but couldn’t smell her. He smoothed the underside across his cheek, but couldn’t touch her. Still he remembered her folding his fingers around it moments before she left.

Henry’s shoulders sagged. Even in those austere times, a button was a shabby gift for a small boy.

Yet his memory insisted. Tilly crouching in the hallway, her brown suitcase alongside. Entreating him to keep the button safe until her return.

Fifty years on, he was still waiting.
 

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D. Avery link
6/7/2018 03:19:51 pm

I enjoyed your flash, all the sensory attempts by the character to give shape to a memory.
I am looking forward to the resolution, or perhaps evolution, of your ambivalence with the "hero" template. If the term was main character rather than hero, would it be more palatable? Do you accept it as a basic and even ancient story structure?
I do and yet don't feel that my stories fit the template, though we often leave a 99 word story unresolved. Yikes, maybe I am just a sketcher and not telling any story at all! Anyway, lots to think about. I'll be looking to see your ongoing thinking.

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Annecdotist
6/7/2018 08:05:34 pm

Thanks, D. I hope to get clearer in my thinking, but I can’t promise! But I value ambivalence as it can give us more flexibility so there might not be much of a resolution.
I do think the hero’s journey makes for a good story but I’m frustrated by the absence of an equivalent for the unheroic amongst us. Dropping the term hero works to a certain extent, but I’d like to see an equivalent model for characters who don’t manage to leave the cave. Although I don’t like stories that are completely bleak some lives are pretty dismal and I like to see that reflected in my reading and writing.
Well, quite a challenge to squeeze a hero’s journey into a 99-word story, but it’s a good question as to what characterises those that work without this. Your own stories are very successful to my mind – much more than a sketch.

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Charli Mills
10/7/2018 04:49:24 am

I'm beginning to understand the rub you feel for the hero's journey. While you recognize it in both these books you've reviewed, the question is, what if the unheroic don't return with the elixir? I think my line of questioning goes to, why give up trying? Maybe many of us never make it out of the cave. That certainly fits the veterans I've worked with, and yet they seemed to find hope in learning about the elixir. So pondering for both of us! Even though I know about the three caves, I still think each came out differently than when they went in. Losing the war, running away or enduring the abuse, never seeing the prince again -- these protagonists evolve, adjust, accept, deny. Your turn to get me thinking! I enjoyed your short story, The Arrangement, too!

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Annecdotist
11/7/2018 12:51:12 pm

Thanks for those reflections, Charli. I certainly agree it’s worth trying to leave the cave, but I’m not sure it’s always a good idea to heed the call to adventure. Or, like the kids in these novels, whether it’s a genuine choice. And, thinking about my three characters, I do think it’s enough for them to have been changed by their experiences, even if the elixir isn’t particularly strong.
Most real lives aren’t heroic in my opinion, and I’d like to write about those in an appealing way. Does this mean adapting the hero’s journey? Does it mean finding another format? Does it mean continuing to muddle through as I’ve always done? Will I ever find out? You’re a great mentor to have on that particular journey and I look forward to further discussions.
And thanks for reading The Arrangement – it was a story that took a while to find a publisher, possibly because of how it addresses racism. Anyway, it’s going to be in my anthology soon.

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