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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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The Unconscious, Dreams and Hallucinations in Fiction

26/6/2017

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Writers are rightly interested in the unconscious as both a source of creativity and a means of revealing our characters’ unacknowledged anxieties and desires. Since Freud considered dreams the royal road to the unconscious, perhaps we should also be curious about dreams. I’m also interested in what happens when the boundary between dreams and reality breaks down, as in hallucinations and delusions, and the thoughts that arise in a hypnagogic state. How do we use these in our fiction? How do we avoid getting it wrong?

The amazing workings of the unconscious mind

In a post last year, The amazing workings of the unconscious mind, I mentioned how the debut novels of Harriet Lane and Shelley Harris were enriched by ideas arising from the unconscious. I recall a similar surprising revelation in the course of writing my debut novel, Sugar and Snails, when I “discovered” the guilty secret of my main character’s father, Leonard, as a young prisoner of war. I’ve written about this in more detail – including its manifestation in my second novel, Underneath – for a forthcoming post, The creative unconscious, for the Women Writers blog, but how do we reveal the workings of our characters’ unconscious?
 
Steve, the narrator of Underneath, is strongly in denial about
his vulnerabilities. But, although he’s never going to confess to the pain an absent father, it’s extremely apparent in the symbolism, some of which I was unaware of at the time of writing, as explored in my post The Dead Space Underneath.
 
Writers can illustrate the opposition between a character’s conscious and unconscious motivations through self-sabotaging behaviour and through
body language that belies the words that come out of their mouths. And, of course, we can draw on another Freudian concept, the slip of the tongue, as I did in this 99-word story:
 
Speed dial

Phone clamped to my ear, I throw clean underwear into a bag. I hate to miss her birthday, but Gill will understand. Grabbing my toothbrush, I blurt out what I know.
The idiot’s done it again. I’ve got to go. There’s no-one else.


Silence at the other end. Why doesn’t she speak?


“The idiot?” A man’s voice? Offended. How could I call him instead of Gill?


“Sorry!” I cringe to think I’ve hurt him. “I didn’t mean it.”


But I did. “We need to talk about this.” Time he got some proper help. Stopped relying on me.

 

Fictional dreams

If you recognise the flash above, it might be because I included it in my post, The amazing workings of the unconscious mind. I also mentioned there that I’m a little suspicious of dreams in fiction, because we need our conscious minds to convert raw musings into something readable. Yet dreams have cropped up in both my published novels. Is this something I can defend?
 
One thing I’d never do is to get my characters thoroughly embedded in the mire only to conclude it was all a dream. The reader who has invested time and emotion in their journey is going to feel cheated. We can all do better than that.
 

I envisaged the dream sequence in Chapter 15 of my debut novel, Sugar and Snails, as a way of providing the reader with a strong hint of the secret that had had them guessing from the start. But it doesn’t seem to have worked this way: although no-one has (yet) complained about this scene; neither has anyone (as far as I can remember) said the dream functioned for them as the Big Reveal.

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From my own reading experience, I wonder if we read fictional dreams differently to how we read about a character’s waking life. Although we know that both are the author’s invention, there’s evidence that our brains respond to the latter as if it were true. I can only speculate, but perhaps we don’t read a dream sequence as deeply and so fail to pick up on the clues.
 
If that’s the case, how do writers signal readers to pay attention to fictional dreams? One way, as Michael Grothaus did in Epiphany Jones, is to make it a recurring dream (so long as the point isn’t overly laboured so that we turn away in boredom): a reader who doesn’t get the significance the first time is offered a second – or third, or fourth – chance.
 

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When it came to my second novel, Underneath I kept Steve’s dreaming to a minimum. But I did want to show readers the workings of his unconscious mind. So, at a time of deep conflict with his girlfriend about her insistence they start a family, he dreams (p 141-2):

Liesel tossed me a fat pink baby and barked at me to feed it. Except that dream-Liesel looked more like Jules. Where’s the bottle? I said. Liesel-Jules said: Use your boobs, that’s what they’re for. Even in the dream, I knew that was crap, but I couldn’t see any other options, so I pressed the baby’s face against my chest. My energy drained as it sucked on my nipple, and my hands turned chalky white. I pulled it off me and chucked it in the sink.
 
But shortly afterwards, in a place that seems closer to reality than a dream, it’s as if he’s the baby:
 
I ducked my head under the duvet, drifting into a limbo between memory and hallucination. I was waiting waiting waiting but nobody came. Crying crying crying but nobody heard. Needing needing needing but nobody cared. The giant loomed over my cot, flecks of powderpuff and hairspray falling on my face. What’s all that noise? she said. You’re a bad bad bad bad boy.
 
Is this a dream or something else? When does a dream become a hallucination? As
an extremely disturbed man intent on appearing super-rational, Steve would probably dismiss this as a dream. But an anomalous experience the following night proves more challenging (p146):
 
Nothing to hang on to except terror; no certainties, no thoughts. No one to save me, and hardly a me to be saved. I was wiped out, obliterated, as if the teacher had chalked my name on the board and rubbed it out. Nothing to show I’d ever existed but a dusting of white on black.
 
No point calling out. Instead, I should make myself small, quiet, inoffensive; merge myself with the blankness of the blackboard until the danger swept past. Yet I couldn’t hold all the bits of myself together, I was all loose pieces and unwieldy shape. I was a squiggle of lines, a tangle of barbed wire, a muddy puddle, nothing that made sense. I had no shield, no shelter, no way to brace myself against attack. I heard a lamb’s bleat, an anguished squeak: my own voice betraying me to the monsters beyond.
 
When, the next morning, Liesel enquires about his nightmare, he tells her (p148):
 
“It was like those stories you read about,” I said. “A guy gets a knock on the head and his memory’s totally wiped. Can’t even remember his own name.”
 
Even so, he dismisses Liesel’s attempts to make sense of his experience, likening it to dream analysis as a party trick (p150):
 
A girl I’d known in Thailand had offered dream analysis to hippies at fifty baht a shot. Most of it boiled down to sex. A chimney meant a prick, a basket a cunt, all extremely formulaic.

Like dreaming when you’re awake

By the end of the novel, Steve’s dreams merge seamlessly with hallucinations, leaving readers to make up their own minds about how much of his story is true. Given the general aversion to spoilers, I’ll resist quoting from the novel, but I can say that the portrayal was influenced by my previous work in mental health.
 
Mental health professionals often normalise hallucinations by referring to them as like dreaming when you’re awake. It’s an interesting analogy as, for some professionals, this would render them meaningless, while for others, it makes them ripe for interpretation. As writers, we get more mileage from hallucinations if we give them meaning.
 
Although I read a lot of good novels with a mental health team, I don’t find many about psychosis and hallucinations. Playthings is one exception; another is a recent read, Epiphany Jones, mentioned above. As I’m learning how to do this in
my current WIP, any pointers to fictional models of which you’re aware would be gratefully received.
 
If hallucinations are the externalisation of the unconscious, writers can go a step further by severing the link with dreaming and making these projections into characters themselves. Examples can be found in Denis Murphy’s monstrous flatmates in Me, Myself and Them, James Marlowe’s figurines in
The Zoo and Alice’s imaginary friend in How to Make a Friend.
 

A dream is just a dream

So to a fresh 99-word story in response to this week’s Carrot Ranch prompt, courtesy of Ruchira Khana. I thought I’d come full circle with Freud’s a cigar is just a cigar, but perhaps that would be a failure of imagination:
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A dream is just a dream
 
“What does it mean, doctor?” She sat back, wide-eyed, expectant.
 
Flying cats, talking trains and flowers oozing blood. The ward staff called her an attention-seeking fantasist, but I gave her an hour a week of my full attention and she filled the space with her rambling dreams.
 
I didn’t want to disappoint her, but none of my interpretations had hit the spot. Sometimes a dream is just a dream. But only in their telling did she seem alive. “I wonder,” I faltered, “did you ever dream of writing a novel?”
 
She snatched a tissue. At last, we could begin.

Slightly tangentially, my short story Across the Table, which isn’t about dreams but appears on the website Fictive Dreams, took a step closer to reality a few days ago with a broadcast on independent radio.

For more stories getting underneath Underneath, click on the image below.

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8 Comments
Norah Colvin link
27/6/2017 12:43:49 pm

This is all very interesting, Anne, and there are numerous links for me to follow and read - too many for this evening - another post for me to return to. I do find dreams interesting but have had little experience with hallucinations, except when my sister was ill. It was quite scary to hear her talk about her alternate "reality". I thought you'd mention Steve's dreams in Underneath, and saw them blend with hallucinations at the end. You pose an interesting question in the post about writing, and then develop that further with your flash. I left a review for Underneath on Amazon earlier. I hope my interpretation is not too far off the mark - a very interesting read and unexpected plot development. The Queen of surprise strikes again.

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Annecdotist
27/6/2017 03:49:07 pm

Thanks, Norah, I think I might have overdone the links this time, however. Can be very scary witness a relative’s hallucinations.
And thanks so much for that lovely review of Underneath – seems a fair interpretation to me but anyway, once the book is out it’s up to others to decide what it’s about! (Although I do keep on offer in my own readings!)

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Jeanne Lombardo link
27/6/2017 11:47:02 pm

Rich nuggets to ponder here, Anne. While Freud has fallen out of favor in the last decades, his work on the unconscious has, in my own life, seemed to have had validity. In my younger rebellious years, I once wrote a postcard to my father under the pressure of guilt rather than a desire to communicate honestly. It was only when popping it into the mail I realized I had written, "Dead Dad" instead of "Dear Dad." Your mention of working in mental health is intriguing. My husband has told me stories of his experience in that field in the 1980s, a woman convinced that she was the Second Coming, another who saw in my husband's black hair an beard the vision of the devil, and so on. Hope to get back to the links. Never any need to regret putting too many in. And I loved getting a preview of your new novel, Underneath. Steve appears to be a very complex character. Certainly his dream and the way her interprets it reveal some psychological anguish.

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Annecdotist
29/6/2017 04:30:55 pm

Thank you, Jeanne. And, wow, what a fabulous Freudian slip in your letter to your dad. I wonder if he noticed.
Religious delusions certainly used to be quite common and not surprising since there is a very thin dividing line between hallucinations and spiritual experience (that’s if one exists at all).
Glad that Steve is getting under your skin.

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Deborah Lee link
28/6/2017 03:38:57 am

Dreams have always held fascination for me, and I think they can range from being astral experiences to prophetic to having a lot of psychoanalytic value to simply taking out the mental garbage. Hallucinations, another story, I suspect. I am not a fan of long, detailed dream sequences in my reading; examples like those you used above, when the dream is used as a way for the reader to see something about the character the character doesn't realize him or her-self -- those are the good ones. Nice flash, too. :-)

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Annecdotist
29/6/2017 04:25:22 pm

Thanks, Deborah. Personally I’m sceptical about dreams being able to predict the future but sometimes they assume more meaning after a new event has occurred. I’m glad you think my fictional dreams seem effective – it’s a tricky area all right.

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Charli Mills
29/6/2017 01:16:08 am

You bring much richness to the consideration of dreams in life and as a literary technique. I hadn't thought about hallucinations, but now that you bring it up, I think J.K. Rowling used them (or the suggestion of them) adeptly throughout her Harry Potter series. I think if the reader feels cheated of coming to a conclusion because the surprise is that it was a dream, they become overused and suspect in stories. Yet, with our own lives spent dreaming, how could we avoid them in writing? Your flash was funny in a dark way.

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Annecdotist
29/6/2017 04:22:24 pm

Thanks, Charli, I’m intrigued that Harry Potter features pseudo-hallucinations – that then started me thinking about how they feature in speculative fiction in general. Probably a big area.
As for my flash, maybe I’ve been dreaming all along and no-one has yet published my books.

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