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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Two novel perspectives on childhood friendship lost

6/9/2017

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After reading The Things We Thought We Knew shortly before its publication back in June, I decided to hang back for another novel on psychosomatic illness or acquired disability with which to pair my review. But picking up The Burning Girl more recently, I was struck by the commonalities between these two novels, not only in the obvious sense of a girl in her late teens looking back on an intense friendship, but in the depth of disturbance resulting from its loss. As happened when I coupled two novels on male infidelity, discovering the similarities enhanced my appreciation of both. While neither pairing uncovered themes of particular personal relevance for me (which can enhance my enjoyment), the fact that they matter sufficiently for more than one author persuades me that other readers might find more to savour. Do let me know if that applies to you!

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The Things We Thought We Knew by Mahsuda Snaith

Ravine Roy spends her eighteenth birthday, as she’s spent almost every day for the past decade, in bed. But that doesn’t stop her mother from throwing a party for the neighbours in her bedroom until, at ten-thirty the morning, Ravine dismisses them and insists she’s going back to sleep. Having sacrificed her teenage years to chronic pain syndrome, Ravine isn’t going to change just because she is now officially an adult. Even when the pain mysteriously disappears, Ravine is determined to stay in bed.
 
As she looks back on her childhood in the Leicester tower block with her friend, Marianne, and her bossy older brother, Jonathan, the author invites the reader to speculate on the trauma that has triggered her retreat from the world. Is it attributable to Marianne’s disappearance, or do the roots lie in her relationship with her mother, a feisty character who, despite the challenges of poverty, racism and dislocation from her own roots in rural Bangladesh, has faced single parenthood with aplomb.
 
I’d been looking forward to Mahsuda Snaith’s debut since we met at a writing workshop in Leicester led by Bernadine Evaristo a few years ago. She’d just acquired an agent, having come second in the Mslexia Novel Writing Competition (in which I’d only reached the long list), so it’s great to see Doubleday (who provided my review copy) bringing her words to the world. I must admit I found the tone a little light for my taste, although I loved the language of the sparky opening and must also applaud the fictional depiction of both chronic pain syndrome and ordinary South Asian family life.

The Burning Girl by Claire Messud

Sometimes I felt that growing up and being a girl was about learning to be afraid. Not paranoid, exactly, but always alert and aware, like checking out the exits in the movie theater or the fire escape in a hotel. You came to know, in a way you hadn’t as a kid, that the body you inhabited was vulnerable, imperfectly fortified.
 
Best friends since nursery school, Julia and Cassie spend every day together the summer they’re twelve: baking cakes and listening to music; volunteering at a cat and dog shelter; swimming in a neighbour’s pool and in a quarry; spooking each other in a derelict mental hospital. But when they return to middle school, their relationship begins to change. Julia, relating this novel from her late teens, joins the more academic classes, and is deeply hurt when Cassie befriends a showy new girl, Delia, with “a way of glancing at boys out of the corner of her sleepy almond eyes as if she were … starring in a TV show invisible to anyone but herself” (p68). Almost as bad, Cassie becomes more than friends with Peter, a boy in the year above whom Julia has always fancied.
 
There are changes afoot for Cassie at home also when her mother becomes involved with Anders Shute. Julia knows that her friend resents his presence in the home Cassie and her mother have shared since her father died when she was a baby but, now the pair no longer swap secrets, she can’t judge how creepy Anders really is. Julia’s new friends in the public speaking contests, as well as her teachers’ and middle-class parents’ expectations for her future, further distance her from Cassie. But when Cassie goes missing, Julia wonders if she ought to have done more. In the end, Julia is so disturbed by what happened to Cassie, and by the demise of an important friendship, she is seeing a therapist (p194-6), albeit an ineffectual one, as
fictional therapists all too often are.
 
I was keen to read The Burning Girl after enjoying Claire Messud’s previous novel,
The Woman Upstairs. While I admired the writing immensely, and liked the story, its deeper themes – of female vulnerability, survivor guilt and the impossibility of ever fully knowing another person – didn’t resonate for me. But they might for you, although I wouldn’t recommend this novel if you dislike loose ends. Claire Messud has chosen to leave the reader in a similar position to Julia in not knowing for sure what went wrong. Thanks to Fleet for my review copy.

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4 Comments
Norah Colvin link
8/9/2017 10:35:12 am

I'm not sure that either of these appeal to me as an immediate read, though I always enjoy a story that gets into the head of the characters, which both seem to do. It's an interesting quote with which you began your review of The Burning Girl. I think I identify with those feelings. They seem to have been thrust upon me growing up.

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Annecdotist
9/9/2017 03:11:47 pm

Thanks for that response, as it helps me to clarify my own. I think I was irritated by this quote because my own experience of childhood was of being afraid right from the beginning, and I’m not sure that being female made much difference (although I was conscious that boys got more opportunities). There’s a very positive review of The Burning Girl in the Guardian today which would be worth pursuing for anyone who isn’t put off by mine!

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Charli Mills
9/9/2017 03:09:46 am

I'm appreciating how you are pairing books to compare different ways authors can develop a theme. It must feel celebratory to see a fellow workshop mate publish. I think I'm interested in reading Masuda's book for that reason.

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Annecdotist
9/9/2017 03:05:28 pm

It is indeed, Charli! Hope you enjoy it if you do get to read it.

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