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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
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Two “novel” perspectives on tourism: Here Comes the Sun and The South in Winter

20/6/2017

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Each of these novels provides a behind-the-scenes perspective on tourism, the first raging at the inequalities, the second poking gentle humour at those who mediate between traveller and native. Having anticipated some of the themes in a recent 99-word story composed before I read either, both, while very different from each other, are definitely my kind of book.

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Here Comes the Sun by Nicole Dennis-Benn

Three generations of women share a small shack a few miles and a whole world away from the luxurious resort of Montego Bay, Jamaica. Merle sits silently gazing at the sky as she’s done every day since her son, Winston, stole the family’s savings and escaped to America. His sister, Delores is a market trader, flattering, cajoling and teasing the tourists into buying her souvenirs. Merle’s eldest granddaughter, Margot, is a receptionist at a swish hotel, with her eye on the bigger prize of manager. Until that happens, she supplements her salary “satisfying the curiosity of foreigners [as] … their personal tour guide on the island of her body” (p10) in order to support her younger sister, Thandi, through school. When the girl becomes a doctor, she’ll save them all.

But changes are afoot. Thandi is discovering
a mind of her own, albeit a confused adolescent mind that seeks salvation in a sketchbook, dodgy skin-lightening treatments and the attentions of a barefoot boy her schoolmates would consider beneath her. Margot is also confused both by the empty promises of her boss, Alphonse, and her feelings towards the outcast, Verdene, cursed by the neighbours as a “sodomite” and “witch”. But their personal problems are soon to be entangled with a societal one when Alphonse’s plans for a new resort threaten to wipe their neighbourhood off the map.

Despite my interest in the downside of tourism, and the plaudits the book has accrued in the US, I didn’t find this novel as engrossing initially as I expected. Although I recognised how the use of language is central to the story before the convent-educated Thandi regrets “she forgot to mangle her words, chew them up and spit them out” (p123), I stumbled over the patois and didn’t relish how, for me, it slowed things down. A stronger obstacle was that, other than young Thandi, I didn’t get the motivations of the characters until more of the back story was revealed. But when it was: wow!

This isn’t only a novel about the way in which Westerners’ lust for sea, sun and sex, and our unwillingness to pay the full price for our portion of paradise, devastates the communities we infiltrate. But it’s also a brave and psychologically astute story of how fear, poverty, powerlessness and prejudice renders
love a rare commodity with abuse, neglect and trauma perpetuated across generations as mothers’ desperate attempts to protect their daughters are experienced as, at best, restrictive, at worst, as cruelty. Thanks to Oneworld for my review copy.

If you’re interested in how tourism perpetuates inequalities you might like my short stories
A House for the Wazungu, Silver Bangles and Dancing White.  I also have a short story on sex tourism that’s still looking for a publisher!

The South in Winter by Peter Benson

If your travelling heyday was, like mine, prior to the internet, did you rely on a guidebook? If so, how closely did you follow the advice therein? Did you notice the quality of the prose? Did you ever wonder about the character who wrote it; did you envy them their job?

I recently shared some
memories of visiting Bangladesh. After four months in India and Nepal steered by the Lonely Planet – noting down any anomalies and being thrilled to meet one of the authors on the backwaters of Kerala – I recall the excitement of crossing the border into Bangladesh with nothing to guide me but my own instincts and hastily scrawled address. As someone who’s given some thought to what motivates us to travel, this new novel about a man in the process of revising a guidebook was one not to be missed.

As a hack for Tread Lightly, “a brand dreamt up by a copywriter as he flew to New York on Concorde” (p17), Matthew Baxter is in Italy in February to revise the guidebook with an out-of-season slant. A heavy drinker, unpublished novelist and petty thief approaching fifty, he might speak the language and know his way around the country but, otherwise, Matthew is lost. The travel book industry is about to bow out to the blogosphere – “what’s a blog but a load of egocentric insights peppered with poor jokes, bad punctuation and poorly framed selfies with some landscape in the out-of-focus background?” (p104) – while his relationship with Cora, his immediate boss at Tread Lightly, broke down about six months earlier. His relationship with himself brought down long before.

With gentle humour, Peter Benson shares Matthew’s dreams (the cinema he views in sleep much more than his hopes for the future), his rambling philosophising, his attempts to compose a love poem for Cora and his cliché and superlative riven passages on the sites he visits. The minutiae of everyday life on the road (or rail), where the quality of each new bed, bath and breakfast genuinely matters, reminded me of
Odysseus Abroad, but I connected more strongly with the poignancy in The South in Winter, where Matthew’s loneliness and emptiness, imperfectly masked in his itinerant lifestyle, echoed that of Steve’s obsession with travel in my novel, Underneath.

Although I’ve visited Italy a few times, I don’t know it well, but that didn’t interfere with my enjoyment of this novel. Since I started this review with a personal reminiscence, I’ll finish with one which was evoked by Matthew’s musings on opera while in Sicily. My first experience of opera was an outdoor performance of Tosca in a Roman amphitheatre, discovered entirely fortuitously because, in those days, I travelled with only very basic information from the national tourism board. While Tosca remains one of my favourites, I knew Matthew had to get back together with Cora when she answered his objections to opera with four words Soave sia il vento: If you don’t know it, and even if you do, take a moment to listen (although Mr A enjoys opera but this leaves him lukewarm).

Thanks Alma Books for my review copy, and the memories evoked!

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Norah Colvin link
25/6/2017 08:15:34 am

Hi Anne, it's nice to hear your enthusiasm for these two books. They do sound interesting. I know I haven't read one of your stories that you mention. I'll have to come back for it later. Good luck with finding a publisher for your story on sex tourism.

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Annecdotist
26/6/2017 12:15:46 pm

Thanks, Norah, hope you enjoy the story if/when you find the time.
And always happy to share my enthusiasm for books.

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Norah Colvin link
4/7/2017 12:20:36 pm

Phew! I think I have caught up on all my reading from this post - all links followed and accounted for. :)
I found your story "A House for the Wazungu" very sad. To use the words of a character from another book about which I read your review - hope is the last thing to go. The people of Kinini had little hope, but they did hold onto it until the end. Such a sad plight for so many.
"Silver Bangles" I'd read a few times before; and I'm pretty sure I have read "Dancing White", or something quite similar, before. You do these stories so well, pointing out the injustices and lack of equity in the world. They do make me stop to think. For about as long as the tourists in the bus, sadly.
I also followed the other links and found a few posts I hadn't read before and left comments on them.
All done now.
Always love reading your posts and stories. You give me much to contemplate. Thank you.

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Annecdotist
4/7/2017 06:40:21 pm

Wow, thanks for following up those links, Norah. You really are a great supporter of this (and many other blogs). I’m following your trail of comments in reverse order (as they appear in my inbox) looking forward to revisiting some older posts with you.
It’s hard to stay in touch with the injustice without being overwhelmed and we’re all guilty of focusing more on the issues closer to home – which is perhaps what I’ve tried to highlight in these stories, and maybe it’s about accepting our (shared) limitations in compassion also.

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