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I started this blog in 2013 to share my reflections on reading, writing and psychology, along with my journey to become a published novelist.​  I soon graduated to about twenty book reviews a month and a weekly 99-word story. Ten years later, I've transferred my writing / publication updates to my new website but will continue here with occasional reviews and flash fiction pieces, and maybe the odd personal post.

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Two novels and a short story about marginalised females

21/9/2017

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Life’s tough on the fringes of society, perhaps particularly if you’re female. Not only have you your own vulnerability to contend with, but the projections of others who feel safer dwelling on your difference than on your similarity to them. Let me take you into the worlds of three such fictional females: The Parcel is harrowing novel about sex workers in Bombay; Dance by the Canal is a lighter novella about a homeless woman in East Germany; my recently published short story, “Ghost Girl” is about an African girl with the wrong colour skin.

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The Parcel by Anosh Irani

Bombay-born Canadian writer Anosh Irani’s fourth novel would be significantly more bearable, though less important, if the parcel in question were delivered by the postie of instead of a modern-day slaver. If the contents were inanimate instead of a ten-year-old Nepalese girl. And if the opening entailed ripping off the wrapping paper rather than rape. If you’ve ever been sexually abused, I recommend you stay away from this one and read A Jigsaw of Fire and Stars instead. But otherwise, especially if you didn’t find The Squeeze  sufficiently sickening, gather round for a disturbingly honest story of how the sex trade feeds on poverty, misogyny and political corruption.
 
Our guide in this sordid landscape is Madhu, a forty-year-old hijra well past her prime. Revered, feared and ridiculed in equal measure, India’s third sex – castrated men who identify, yet somehow fail to pass, as women – has been part of the culture for centuries. Fleeing her disapproving father as an adolescent boy to become one of the most celebrated prostitutes in central Bombay, Madhu is now reduced to begging. Tasked with preparing a new parcel for opening – essentially desensitising her sufficiently to endure penetration without screaming so much the client will ask for his money back – Madhu is proud to have devised a method of ensuring compliance without the child completely losing her mind. But it’s still a form of torture, taking an emotional toll on both victim and perpetrator, reminding her of her own childhood struggles. Alongside the story of this perverted coupling, is (an apparently meticulously-researched) insight into hijra culture and a minor plot concerning the attempts of unscrupulous property developers to expel the hijras and sex workers from the prime real estate they occupy in central Bombay.
 
Having been fascinated by hijras when I visited India many years ago, I’ve been hoping for a more nuanced fictional encounter than I found in
The Land Where I Flee. Proud and self-pitying, courageous and cowardly, cruel and kind, Madhu ticks that box. Only a few years younger than Diana in my debut novel, Sugar and Snails, although a hundred times more unlucky in life, I was interested to find Madhu similarly reviewing the past, wondering whether such a radical transformation would have been necessary had her family be more accepting of the child she was.
 
A painful read (albeit rewarded with a snip of redemption at the end), I wish the world it depicts were a fantasy, but The Parcel makes a strong case for
fiction as truth. Published by Scribe, who provided my review copy, it deserves a wide readership. If, as has been claimed, Uncle Tom’s Cabin contributed to the demise of African slavery, perhaps The Parcel can do likewise for the trafficking of children for sex.

Dance by the Canal, by Kerstin Hensel (translated by Jen Calleja)

Under a bridge in Leibniz, East Germany, alongside the canal that has been part of her life since childhood, Gabriela scribbles away on stolen scraps of paper. She identifies as a writer and poet; others see her as homeless, a challenge to the Communist ideal. As she transcribes her autobiography, punctuated by reports of her daily struggle to find food and, as winter approaches, warmth and shelter, we get a glimpse of the inner homelessness that has brought her to this place.
 
The only child of a top vascular surgeon and a popular society hostess, Gabriela’s early years are characterised by loneliness, until an intriguing woman with a red wig comes to teach the violin. Unfortunately, Gabriela has no talent for music, although her obsession with her teacher endures for the rest of her life. Finally able to mix with other children on starting school, the contradictions of the State are confusing: with the letter I for Intelligentsia next to her name in the class register, Gabriela is expected to shine, yet her father’s prestige is gradually diminishing, and he turns to alcohol with disastrous results. Meanwhile, Gabriela has befriended the most unsuitable girl in the class from her parents’ perspective, a girl from a family that lives in filth, and entices her to dance naked by the canal, the water coloured by whichever of the factories has unloaded its effluent that day.
 
Gabriela’s story is defined by a series of disappearances, unexplained to her but likely to result from the individual’s unpopularity with the Communist regime, such that, in the end, she can’t be sure she hasn’t been disappeared herself. Despite the dark subject matter, Dance by the Canal is light in tone, leaving the reader to wonder how much of Gabriela’s story is an accurate reflection of events. A short book to read in an evening, I received my copy from the publishers, Peirene Press.

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Finally, to my own short story, “Ghost Girl”, published this week by Spelk Fiction. Regularly readers of this blog might recognise some of the themes, as it’s a reworking of a 99-word story I wrote as part of the weekly Flash Fiction Challenge. Do let me know what you think.

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4 Comments
Norah Colvin link
24/9/2017 11:41:01 am

I don't think I'll be reading either of these, Anne, though it would be good if The Parcel could have the effect you describe, similar to Uncle Tom's Cabin.
I enjoyed your story, with its dark ending. So sad to think these awful situations persist in so many parts of the world. Sad to say I don't remember a story similar in a previous flash. Maybe I missed it. Sorry.

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Annecdotist
25/9/2017 04:59:45 pm

You're excused on all accounts – thanks for reading and commenting :-)

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Charli Mills
5/10/2017 01:27:34 am

If Uncle Tom's cabin contributed to the demise of slavery as an institution in America, it has not successfully humanized black American 160 years later, judging by the racial tensions that continue to tie all of us Americans to our origins as a slave nation. Thus, my heart is heavy for how long The Parcel would have to wait to see children not objectified as objects of sex. Sometimes I think we miss the true issues that lead to such social imbalances of control, power and why we dehumanize sectors of the population for the gratification of government or elitist ideals. Given my own background, it seems I should gracefully bow out of reading as Norah has, but I often feel driven to want to know why, to better recognize the influences of poverty, misogyny and political corruption. I'm not triggered by the violence; I'm triggered by the denial of it existing. Ah, heavy reviews, Anne.

But I'm happily shifting gears to celebrate the publication of "Ghost Girl," especially knowing that it was something developed out of your 99-word flash fictions. I do remember when you wrote about this character.

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Annecdotist
9/10/2017 05:22:55 pm

Heavy reviews indeed, Charli. Thanks for reading and sharing your views. I imagine it’s hatred of denial that gets me reading this difficult stuff also, and any trauma that is trivialised makes me feel quite ill. But it can be painful in the reading encountering characters mired in the denial – which they will inevitably be to keep perpetuating the evil. I’m pessimistic about change but after the traumas of The Parcel, I needed to give myself a bit of hope!
Glad you remembered Ghost Girl, but after hearing you read from the anthology with such enthusiasm, I appreciate how much work you put into the weekly challenge and can imagine you remember a good proportion of the thousands of flashes you’ve read from the community.

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