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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
Away from her desk, Anne guides book-loving walkers through the Derbyshire landscape that inspired Charlotte Brontë’s Jane Eyre.
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Young women trapped on adulthood’s frontier: The Blue Room & The Ha-Ha

10/8/2019

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Two short novels about vulnerable young women who are psychologically and physically trapped: the first by the locked door to her bedroom; the second by the psychiatric care system. Both women have unusually close bonds with their mothers, potentially cause and consequence of their struggles to relate to their peers. Both encounter difficulties distinguishing fantasy from reality, feel estranged at parties and find life getting both better and worse when they fall for young men. With unreliable narrators, whether they break free of their fetters is left to the reader to decide.

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The Blue Room by Hanne Ørstavik translated by
Deborah Dawkin

Although now an adult, Johanne is still preparing for life to begin. Sharing a cramped Oslo apartment with her mother, she’s studying hard at the university, dreaming of, and saving for, her future as a clinical psychologist in an idyllic woodland setting. While the mother-daughter relationship is enmeshed, the pair spending their leisure time together, they have separate lives during the weekday 9-to-5. The mother also has a lover – albeit one who is unlikely to leave his wife and family – but the relationship sours when Johanne acquires a lover too.
 
The novella opens on the morning the young woman is due to depart for America with Ivar, but her mother has left for work and Johanne is locked in her room. As she tries to stay calm, and to puzzle over potential escape strategies, she reflects on her life and her core relationships: with her mother, with Ivar, with her friend Karin, and with God.
 
The unadorned language suits the story perfectly, with even Johanne’s sadomasochistic fantasies revealed in a matter-of-fact manner. My stomach clenched, however, at the (author’s – or translator’s – who can tell?) repeated misuse of the word stomach for abdomen, especially when Johanne tries to soothe herself with deep breaths.
 
Although Johanne has high ambitions for her career, she’s right at the beginning of her psychology studies, and I enjoyed her musings over classic experiments, concepts and theories – although I was surprised she was introduced to cognitive dissonance and attribution theory in the same lecture. But this nudges the reader to consider the psychology of Johanne’s character, drawing on these and other constructs. How much of her ties to her mother can be attributed to her own fears of separation versus her mother’s narcissistic need for control? Is the dissonance induced by her sexual awakening conflicting with her desire to please and protect her mother, and symbolised by the locked door, too much to bear? Are her disturbing fantasies of sexual submission rooted in a primary relationship with a parent who perceived her as an extension of herself?
 
I’d have liked more about her infancy and early childhood to answer those questions fully, and I wondered about the absent father‘s relationship with Johanne, although he seems to have been sexually violent towards his wife. In contrast to when the novella was first published – in Norwegian in 1999, and the mother’s use of a Walkman to listen to music dates the story from around that time – a student staying at home rather than sharing a house with friends wouldn’t be so unusual today. When we come across real-life stories of parents having their adolescent offspring abducted to desert boot camps, locking a bedroom door for the day doesn’t seem so extreme. Especially if your unworldly daughter is planning to miss several weeks of lectures to travel abroad with a man she’s only recently met.
 
Given Johanne’s naivety, it’s a stroke of good luck she’s fallen for a decent-enough man and that the sex is less brutal than her fantasies; that’s if we can believe her account. I also think that the story could have been more psychologically subtle had there been a certain twist at the end. But, raising lots of questions, it’s perfect for book groups, which is handy because that’s how it came my way. Published by Peirene Press in 2014, I bought my own copy and the lively discussion – including the multiple associations to the blue of the title – brought home to me how much of the nuances my rushed or lazy reading pace meant I’d missed.
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There were two things we all agreed on: one, that we enjoyed the book; and two, if we’d picked it up in a bookshop and seen this endorsement, we’d have quickly put it down again. A strange kind of marketing! Would you do the same?


If you’d like to read another coming-of-age story peppered with psychology you might enjoy my own debut novel, Sugar and Snails, about a psychology lecturer who has kept her past identity a secret for thirty years, which was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.

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If it’s enmeshed mother-daughter relationships you’re after, I can strongly recommend Deborah Levy’s Hot Milk and A Jest of God by Margaret Laurence. There are also two or three in my short story collection, Becoming Someone. Why don’t I read you one?

“I Want Doesn’t Get” is about a woman whose identity has merged with her mother’s.


The Ha-Ha by Jennifer Dawson

Josephine – although we don’t learn her name until later – is on the mend, having graduated from the hospital dormitory to her own room with a view. How she’s managed to recover is a mystery, given that the only treatments – obliquely referred to – are insulin coma therapy and ECT. The staff are kindly, although perhaps as needy as the patients themselves, but give no space to talk through problems or advice on how to live. This might well be an accurate depiction of 1950s inpatient psychiatric care.
 
Luckily Josephine finds a friend in Alistair, whom she meets while she’s lying in the ha-ha in the hospital grounds. He makes her feel like a person again after a disastrous outing to a party in the ‘real world’ where her inability to make small talk leaves her feeling isolated and estranged. Unfortunately, Alastair can’t fix everything and has his own mental health issues too. After a brief flowering, Josephine’s back in the dormitory with Judas Iscariot and the rest.
 
It seems she’s always been odd: her mother at pains to curb her inappropriate giggling, although the pair were the best of friends. Little wonder then that Josephine struggled on leaving home for Oxford University, and more so on her mother’s death. The first-person narration, firmly embedded in Josephine’s unusual mind, does not dwell on these events, however; more on her struggles in conversation, her inability to follow the rules.
 
Nowadays, Josephine might attract a diagnosis of Asperger’s and – or is this wishful thinking? – might have been helped before she’s developed the need to hallucinate the animals that keep her company and earn her a schizophrenia label. But Alistair advises not to worry about the system’s definitions, the main thing is to be herself.
 
Like The Faculty of Dreams, the novella provides a rare insight into an unusual mind and the pain of being able to see beneath a veil that others barely notice. Josephine can’t follow the social rules, and sometimes she doesn’t want to. Her dilemma is that she’s happiest cut off from other people, but that’s when she’s deemed most mad.

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First published by Little, Brown in 1961, I discovered this novella through Elizabeth Lowry‘s list of top ten books about psychiatry. Ordering my copy through the Book Depository, I was rather surprised to receive what looks like a bound photocopy of a book from Kansas City public library with an ugly cover and the author’s name misspelled on the front. Although it didn’t spoil my reading experience, I did wonder about the ethics of charging £10.95 (for those who don’t use sterling, that’s slightly above the cost of my beautifully produced books) for such little investment from Andesite Press, and presumably nothing for the author or her estate. While the book might be now out of print, it seems too soon for it to be out of copyright in the UK. If my review has tempted you to read it, be warned!
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I was preparing lunch for my book group when I read Charli’s post with the call for 99-word stories featuring a poisoned apple. No prizes for guessing where that took me …

Staying close to Mother

There wasn’t much my mother loved, but she sure did love that tree. Sharp shade at summer’s peak; soft pink blossom at its dawn. Come summer’s end she loved to feed its sweet-sour fruit to me.

When time was ripe she’d pick a golden orb and shine its skin with hers. Warmed and polished by her breast, I’d accept her offering solemnly. As if cradling the whole world in my palms.

“Eat!” she said.

Obediently, I crunched, as juices dribbled from my mouth. Although it gave me bellyache, I never once declined an apple from my mother’s poisoned tree.
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6 Comments
Sarah Brentyn link
12/8/2019 02:03:18 am

These sound right up my alley. Psychological. Unreliable narrator. Novella-length. (Although the first one...eh, I'm rethinking after your review and the recommendation inside the book.) As always, love your flash. Well done.

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Anne Goodwin
12/8/2019 07:09:42 am

I'm no marketing expert, but it seems to be jumping on a bandwagon and appealing to the wrong audience, alienating the 'right' readership and disappointing the fans of 50shades.

Lovely to see you back at the Ranch.

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Charli Mills link
13/8/2019 03:32:28 am

Nice finale with your flash in regards to both book reviews and your own work, as well. Your last line sums it all up -- enmeshed relationships that have daughters eating from their mothers' poisoned apple tree.

That's some wonk marketing and distribution on account of both reviewed books. The desperation to get a previously lucrative readership to buy makes for strange connections between books. It's misleading and also misunderstands who readers are. The slapped on cover from the repository could afford to be better updated or repaired at the fee charged to read it!

Thought-provoking!

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Anne Goodwin
14/8/2019 06:56:42 am

Thanks, Charli. A girl has to eat, even if it's poison!

As for the Blue Room marketing, I imagine it's a freak flash of inspiration that backfired. Perhaps an indication of how tough it can be for a small press.

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Norah Colvin
16/8/2019 12:13:26 pm

Hi Anne, both these reviews seem to be a bit longer than usual. Or maybe it's me. I don't think I'm in the mood for the psychological twists at the moment or for interrogating the mother-daughter relationship as either daughter or mother. I hope the number of poisoned apples I've distributed is far less than those I was fed.
I agree with you about the marketing of the first book. There's no way I would have read it. I am also disappointed with the condition in which you received The Ha-Ha. Fortunately, your own flash story finished the post on a high note.

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Anne Goodwin
18/8/2019 06:15:07 pm

They might be a bit longer, Norah. My reviews do vary according to how much I feel I have to say about the book – which seems independent of how much I’ve actually enjoyed it – and the mood I’m in and how much time I have when I come to write it. I don’t even try to be consistent!
I have to say that giving out fewer poisoned apples than you were given is a real achievement – anything else is a bonus.

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