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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Are toilets visible in fiction?

21/11/2022

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People often think I’m joking when I mention World Toilet Day every 19th November. But 3.6 billion people living with inadequate sanitation is no laughing matter. Unsafe and unsanitary toilets can damage people’s health and inhibit access to education. They also pollute the environment.

The theme for World Toilet Day 2022 was making the invisible visible. Although the invisible in question is the human waste leaching into rivers, lakes and soil, it could also refer to a pet project of mine.
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Since 2016, I’ve been celebrating the novels I’ve read which in some way remind us of our dependence on toilets. But I’ve either not been very vigilant, or fictional toilets are almost invisible, as, at the last count, I had only 18 on my list.

It would be wrong to assume authors avoid toilets because they’re not interesting. Or simply too sordid. In a recent batch, I found toilet inequalities, cultural differences and toilets in a Nazi concentration camp, a jihadi training camp in Afghanistan and a summer residence in Cape Cod. You can read about them here:

Fictional toilets


With the publication of my novella Stolen Summers, I can bring that total to 19. But perhaps you can help me add a few more? If you’ve read any novels that acknowledge that people use toilets, perhaps you could let me know.
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In the meantime, here’s a short extract from Stolen Summers, in which Matilda and Doris find a night-time visit to the toilets is the only way of getting a letter to a friend on another ward. (Incidentally, do you know what Izal is? When I took this piece to my critique group, a couple of the younger members, weaned on cushioned tissue, had never encountered it. Hopefully, it’s clear enough from the context.)

Summer’s heat intensified the stench and the moonlight exposed the smears of menstrual blood and faecal matter on walls, porcelain and tile. It was not a place to linger, as the responsibility for cleaning the area fell to patients who were too disturbed and incapable to work in the bakery, laundry or kitchens, and who could not be trusted with bleach. When Doris gave Matilda a few sheets of medicated paper, stamped GOVERNMENT PROPERTY, and pointed her towards the windowsill, Matilda dampened it at the basin and used it – as far as possible, given its poor absorbency – to swab the ledge.

Doris tutted. “We seem to be out of parchment, madam. You’ll have to make do with bog roll.” She handed her a few more sheets of Izal and a pin.

Suddenly self-conscious, Matilda hunched over the paper, like a schoolgirl in an exam. Its smell, although unpleasant, partly neutralised the odour in the air. Unfortunately, whether she tried scratching the rough side or the smooth side, it was hopeless: the pin either tore the paper or left no mark.

“You’ll be popular the morrow when they’ve nowt to wipe their bums with.” Doris snatched the pin and pierced Matilda’s thumb, releasing a tiny red bauble from her skin. “Was you never blood-sisters in them posh houses? Now, get writing! Nurse Ninny won’t keep her eyes shut for ever and I want my bed.”
Matty’s fans will be pleased to know that she eventually gets some bathroom bliss in the next book, Lyrics for the Loved Ones, with her own ensuite. But I hadn’t really dwelt on what that might feel for someone who grew up with an outside toilet shared between different families. Until now.
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How else was I going to respond to the 99-word story prompt this week? Although “Oh my!” isn’t an expression Matty would use in the books, she has kindly agreed to say it to help me meet the challenge. And there’s an extra connection, albeit not spelt out here, in that she refers to Clementine, her favourite care assistant, as Oh My Darling.
A room of one’s own

“Oh my!” said Matty, gripping the Zimmer with both hands.
Clementine’s smile faded. “Don’t you like it, my lovely? We could get it redecorated if it’s not right.”
Matty loved the barley-twist wallpaper. She loved the sea view. The sparkling tiles in the bathroom. The single bed. “Would men use it?”
Clementine laughed. “Only if you invite them.”
Ladies could be equally messy. Failing to flush. Tinkling on the floor. Would they be noisy passing through her bedroom? Would they steal her shampoo? “How many is it for?”
“The bathroom? It’s an ensuite, my lovely. Your very own room.”
 
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4 Comments
Norah Colvin
30/11/2022 10:45:43 am

I'm pleased you still remind us of World Toilet Day, Anne. Adequate sanitation is important for all.
I was thinking as I read your post, that there are possibly many junior fiction and middle grade novels that mention toilets. There's always a lot of 'toilet' humour for the JF age group. Then I remembered that there was some discussion, and comparison, of toilets in the middle grade historical novel I am reading at the moment. It's called 'The Ratcatcher's Daughter' and is set here in Brisbane in 1901. Three different standards of toileting were mentioned - the flushing indoor toilets of the wealthy, the outdoor but in a courtyard area of a middle-class family, and the down the backyard dunny of the poorer family.
I'm with Matty. I'd prefer to not have men using my toilet (family members excepted), but agree that women can be messy too. While I am very grateful for public toilets, I am often disgusted at the state people leave them in. Perhaps we should be reminded of how lucky we are more often.

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Anne Goodwin
30/11/2022 04:46:50 pm

That's interesting about children's books. I wonder if we're stuffy about toilets in adult books as we want to distance ourselves from that pooh obsesssion.
Your novel sounds good too. A great way of showing inequalities.

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Norah Colvin
5/12/2022 10:30:19 am

Perhaps kids are more honest about bodily functions and haven't yet learned to hide them. Kids find them funny, but we adults tend to find them an inconvenience.
I am enjoying the novel. It was written in 2012 or 2014 (can't remember which) way before Covid, but such a similar response to the plague in 1900s. Talk about progress!

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Anne Goodwin
6/12/2022 08:43:37 am

I've read a few novels about plague and pandemics, written before ours, and marvelled at how well the authors imagined the impact on everyday lives.




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