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Anne Goodwin’s drive to understand what makes people tick led to a career in clinical psychology. That same curiosity now powers her fiction.
A prize-winning short-story writer, she has published three novels and a short story collection with small independent press, Inspired Quill. Her debut novel, Sugar and Snails, was shortlisted for the 2016 Polari First Book Prize.
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Exile: A Long Petal of the Sea & Little Bandaged Days

24/1/2020

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What could these two novels possibly have in common other than the similar colours on the covers, and that I read them consecutively in the week they were published in the UK? The first is a family saga spanning six decades from the Spanish Civil War to the defeat of Pinochet in 1990s Chile from a doyenne of Latin American literature. The second is a debut about madness and motherhood. Both are concerned with exile, to and from Europe and the Americas; the latter also addressing psychological exile from the self.

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A Long Petal of the Sea by Isabel Allende
translated by Nick Caistor and Amanda Hopkinson

When Roser marries Victor, neither expects it to last. She’s still in love with his brother, Guillem, and is carrying his child. But Guillem has died, fighting fascism on the losing side of the Spanish Civil War. When Franco’s troops march into Barcelona, Victor reluctantly abandons his patients at the hospital to escort his mother and Roser, along with thousands of other refugees, across the border into France.
 
The French are suspicious of this ragbag horde of socialist and communist sympathisers, warehousing them in squalid concentration camps. But when news comes through that the poet, Pablo Neruda, has chartered a ship to take some of them to Chile, Victor and Roser manage to secure a place on board. Arriving in the “long petal of sea and wine and snow”, the only way the pair can guarantee they’ll be resettled together is by becoming husband and wife.
 
Although relating initially like brother and sister, and despite both taking other lovers, their union is strong, bound by their politics, their loyalty to their native Catalonia and their shared investment in raising Roser’s son, Marcel. She finds prestige and fulfilment in a career as a concert pianist and teacher of music; he becomes a surgeon of some renown. He’s also the occasional chess opponent of the socialist politician Salvador Allende, whose short-lived government comes to an abrupt end in a military coup. After being arrested, tortured and held for a year in another concentration camp, Victor manages to flee to Venezuela, exiled from his homeland for a second time.
 
While pleased to add another country to my reading around the world project, and to learn a little more about the Spanish Civil War than I had in The Girl with the Leica, I didn’t find this novel as engaging as I’d hoped. Perhaps it was trying to do too much, but I cared less about the characters as time moved on so that the redemptive ending seemed clichéd. But I’m sure the author has no need to worry about what I think! Thanks to Bloomsbury for my review copy.


Little Bandaged Days by Kyra Wilder

When the young family arrive at Geneva airport, they’re met by two company cars. The first whizzes the husband off to begin work immediately, while the second takes the wife, baby and four-year-old daughter to a luxury hotel. A week or so later, they’re installed in a small ground-floor apartment which becomes almost the whole world for the mother and children and a place to change from one beautifully tailored suit to another for the dad.
 
Everyone’s happy, or so the woman assures her mother in middle-of-the-night phone calls to America. What could be better than an endless round of taking her husband’s suits to the dry cleaners and her children to the park? In a city where she knows no-one, apart from her increasingly absent husband, where she can’t speak the language – even Bonjour is an achievement – and the natives are somewhat uptight? What could be more lovely than the freedom to play and mess and clean it all up again, to be the perfect mother, the perfect wife?
 
Wow! The narrative voice is pitch perfect: it doesn’t take long to detect the brittleness behind the mother’s smile. With backstory and context – the four members of his family don’t even have names – scrubbed down to the bare minimum, the reader is totally inside this woman’s head (without any irritating stream-of-consciousness pretension). And she’s unravelling. Through a gradual process of sleeplessness, isolation and a determination to keep up appearances learnt at her mother’s knee. The tension kept me turning the pages through days and nights of not an awful lot going on. I felt concern for her and her children, and anger that a woman should find herself in this position in these supposedly post-feminist days.
 
But then, a quarter of the way through, another voice comes in. No, not in her head, but a few months on, in some secure facility, a secure psychiatric unit or the hospital wing of a prison. And though it didn’t hang around for long, it returned three or four times, I suppose to crank up the tension, but it weakened the story for me. (And the hint that she’s in a straitjacket – well, mammoth eyeroll!) Having so much admired – and envied – the author’s confidence up until this point, I was disappointed at what seemed like a slip from literary fiction into domestic noir.
 
Nevertheless, an impressive debut about the slim line between motherhood and madness that only just missed five stars from me. Thanks to Picador for my review copy.
 
For other novels on the impact of social isolation on the mother’s psyche, see Snegurochka; After Birth and Hausfrau, which is also set in Switzerland. My own novel, Underneath, about a man who seeks to resolve a relationship crisis by keeping a woman captive in a cellar, explores a process of mental disintegration from a male point of view.

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Wanting to post these reviews today, I looked in my inbox for the latest flash fiction challenge. Okay, a park bench, I thought, shouldn’t be difficult to pair with Little Bandaged Days. I’d produced my ninety-nine words before I read the full instructions to link it to a particular point in this clever gif showing twenty-four hours in the life of a park bench. Fortunately, there’s a point in the sequence where a mother watches a child playing.
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Maternal isolation (9.00 daren’t become 9.30)

Someone’s nabbed the bench beside the sandpit, a proper mother with clean clothes and groomed hair. Erica could go and sit alongside her, there’s room for another set of carrot sticks, juice boxes, wet wipes and menagerie of plastic toys. But the proper mother might speak to her and Erica wouldn’t know if she was sniping at her choice of toddler snacks or inviting her for tea. Even if she trimmed her words so Erica could understand, she couldn’t answer. She needs quiet, a clear channel to her children’s cries. She’s already distracted by the voices in her head.
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12 Comments
Charli Mills
25/1/2020 05:39:24 am

Anne, I did not know that Pablo Neruda helped bring over refuges of the Spanish Civil War. It can be difficult to invest in a story when you find the characters less and less engaging. Interesting that you found the first characterization of Little Bandages so spot on and then weakened. I like how you picked up the motherly worry in your own flash, and yes, it does fit 9:00.

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Anne Goodwin
26/1/2020 08:18:47 am

Yeah, I didn't know that either, but there's a great tradition of mixing poetry and politics which I expect to see revived in the UK in the very near future!!!

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D. Avery link
25/1/2020 09:21:44 pm

Phew, matches all around- the novel reviews, the prompt, the 99 words.
In 99 words you neatly make it all seem so messy. I imagine mothering can be precarious for mental health. Too bad the character also lost her confidence.

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Anne Goodwin
26/1/2020 08:25:11 am

When the prompt's wide-open like this one, I actually to find it easier to have another constraint.
Like everything else, maternal mental health is underfunded, as are the kind of social structures that would prevent it getting this far. But without that support, there's often a dire impact on the children. Yet politicians wring their hands in despair, as if no-one knows how to deal with it!
At the moment we're paying for our own Marie Antoinette a.k.a. Princess Kate to conduct a survey into the needs of young children because of course being married to the third in line for the throne makes her far better qualified than the academics who've already researched it and the social workers and clinicians who come up against it every day.

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Norah Colvin
28/1/2020 11:35:28 am

I was thinking I'd enjoy A Long Petal of the Sea as I read your review - until ... Maybe I still would anyway. One day.
I'm not sure about Little Bandaged Days. It might be a bit too close to home to me. What a life. It doesn't sound much fun.
I do like the way you've described the mother and her situation in your flash. Social interactions aren't always clean. In fact, they're often messy and it can be difficult to know when to jump in and when to stay out of the water.

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Anne Goodwin
29/1/2020 08:32:13 am

Hah, sometimes my reviews entice and some times they push away. Isabel Allende has published a lot of novels and there are others I'd recommend reading before this one. But I haven't tried it as an audiobook which might work differently – I know that's the way you prefer to read.
I'm glad you liked the flash. I think my character has reached a stage of loneliness and isolation that, if she did reach out, she might not be able to make the connection, especially with the language barrier.

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Norah Colvin
5/2/2020 11:40:56 am

I hope she can make the connection. It's important for all of us to do so.
I do enjoy 'reading' with audiobooks. At the moment it seems the best way for me to allocate the time, little of it though there is. I don't seem to be able to sustain reading with my eyes at the moment. They get so used to screen rather than paper. One day I'll revert.
I've just downloaded the Tattooist of Auschwitz to begin listening to tomorrow. Is that one you've reviewed? It feels like it might be. I know you have short stories on the topic of these tattoos.

Anne Goodwin
6/2/2020 01:44:39 pm

I haven't read The Tattooist but I did initially think it would be my kind of book. Then, chatting to someone who have read it – in a bookstore where I was trying to sell mine – I was less convinced. So I'll be interested in what you think of it.

Norah Colvin
9/2/2020 10:33:42 am

So far I am enjoying the Tattooist, Anne. It is fiction based on a true story. The last book I read with my ears was also that (although I listened to a BBC dramatisation of Animal Farm in between). I've just read a review of The Tattooist in an attempt to check if it was classed as a biography and see that a lot of the 'facts' have been called into question. While I loved the previous 'based on truth' story, I always wondered which parts were true and which were not. I'm beginning to wish I hadn't read the review just yet. I'd rather just think of them as fiction than wonder about the basis.

Anne Goodwin
11/2/2020 06:49:27 pm

I agree, sometimes it's harder to read when you can't tell what's fact and what's fiction.

Norah Colvin
16/2/2020 11:01:58 am

I'm doing my best to just enjoy the story now. I'll read more about it later. It's not at all what I expected.

Anne Goodwin
16/2/2020 04:29:03 pm

I'm intrigued that it's not what you expected!




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