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I started this blog in 2013 to share my reflections on reading, writing and psychology, along with my journey to become a published novelist.​  I soon graduated to about twenty book reviews a month and a weekly 99-word story. Ten years later, I've transferred my writing / publication updates to my new website but will continue here with occasional reviews and flash fiction pieces, and maybe the odd personal post.

ANNE GOODWIN'S WRITING NEWS

Teenagers in Love: The Virgins by Pamela Erens and This Beautiful by Judy Chicurel

30/10/2014

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Segueing neatly from my last post featuring my late-adolescent hairstyles, I’m sharing my experiences of two novels about 17/18-year-olds at different ends of the 1970s, both of which puzzled me until they blossomed into something surprisingly deep and moving with the concluding chapters.

All eyes are on Aviva Rossner as she arrives at the prestigious Auburn Academy in the late 1970s exuding glamour and youthful sexuality. Bruce Bennett-Jones is mortified when she snubs his feeble advances and takes up with the unlikely Seung Jung. The couple flaunt their relationship, evoking the envy and fascination of their classmates and irritation among their teachers: this is a fictional school where rules may be broken but not in such a blatant manner. But underneath the veneer of almost-adult confidence, the pair are struggling. Aviva, in love with being loved, is terrified of the loss of control that could come with indulging her appetites; Seung, gentle and caring, can’t understand her reluctance to join him in his experiments with drugs. But it’s sex that proves their downfall: as every fumbling attempt ends in failure, they blame themselves, and the stakes are heightened for their next encounter.

What makes this novel of the painful transition from childhood to adulthood particularly poignant is the total absence of parental figures to contain their anxieties and provide a helping hand. Having asked to go to boarding school to escape her fractured family, Aviva finds her parents too consumed by their own unravelling to notice how little she eats; Seung’s Korean-American parents have no concept of a child having his own ambitions or a mind separate from theirs. The teachers are both excessively lax and punitive, turning a blind eye to the students’ risk-taking until a particular transgression is discovered and the disciplinary machinery is set in motion. No compassion, no guidance, no sense of responsibility on the part of the school: as fine an argument against despatching adolescents to boarding school as you might find.

It seemed strange at first that the young lovers’ story should be narrated by the outsider, Bruce, leading to some convoluted rationalisations of how he might be in a position to describe their private interactions. But when we discover his role in the tragic denouement, it seems perfectly apt, and his behaviour has lasting repercussions.

Published by John Murray who kindly provided my review copy, The Virgins is Pamela Erens’ second novel: a story of loneliness, envy and betrayal, and the vulnerability that lies beneath the veneer of adolescence posturing.
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This Beautiful portrays a working-class Long Island community in the summer of 1972 through the eyes of Katie, who is filling in her time between school and college hanging out on the wrong side of town, waiting for Luke, recently returned from Vietnam, to notice her. Amid the poverty; unwanted pregnancy; racism; drug and alcohol abuse; and the confusing casualties of a distant war; friendships are formed and the exuberance of youth shines through. Yet initially I found myself overwhelmed by the wide cast of characters and struggling to care about a narrator who revealed so little of herself. Although I came of age in the same decade and read a lot of fiction set in the USA (and regularly engage in blog and Twitter chats about the myriad incarnations of the English language), I felt swamped by the alien cultural references. I floundered about in search of the narrative arc until I realised that the novel could be read as a series of short stories with overlapping characters set in the same time and place. Almost like a memoir, the narrative builds layer by layer gradually enveloping the reader in Katie’s world.

The full title – If I Knew You Were Going to Be This Beautiful I Never Would Have Let You Go – is something of a mouthful, but perfectly apt for the novel’s emotional core of yearning, nostalgia and loss. Yet Katie reveals little of the process she is undergoing until towards the end. A typical adolescent, her focus is on the superficial: clothes, alcohol, the various teenage tribes and chatting at Eddy’s over a (to me) mysterious egg cream (and, at this distance, I wanted to slap her hand every time she went to light another cigarette). Her tales are littered with characters looking to leave Elephant Beach; if not for a better life, then for something different. The town’s decay is frequently referenced, yet Katie is fiercely attached to the place. In case my tardiness in grasping this deeper meaning was the author’s intention rather than due to a blind spot of my own, I’d better issue a spoiler alert – Katie, adopted as an infant, is drawn to the grunge because that’s where her fantasy of her teenage birth-mother resides. Adolescence is about letting go of childhood yet for Katie, and for some others of her peer group, it’s hard to let go of something you haven’t quite had.

Judy Chichurel’s debut, This Beautiful, is published today by Tinder Press – thanks to them for my proof copy. Still haunted by this novel, I’m looking forward to checking my reading against others’ reviews.

I’ve written several short stories featuring adolescents, which can be accessed via my virtual annethologies page, but these novels, and especially This Beautiful, has prompted some musings on how the theme is addressed in my forthcoming debut, Sugar and Snails. Unlike Katie, Diana is ahead of her peers in leaving her home town behind. Yet, psychologically, even in middle age there’s a part of her still stuck in adolescence; perhaps she hasn’t properly mourned the part of her she prematurely let go. Something to ponder as I go through the edits; what about you? Are you drawn to tales of troubled teenagers as a reader or writer?


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Tracey Scott-Townsend link
31/10/2014 03:55:55 am

Hi Anne,

Yes, I'm drawn to novels about troubled teenagers as both a reader and a writer. In my head I feel forever seventeen, as I think this was somewhat of a coming-of-age year for me. The MCs of my first novel The Last Time We Saw Marion (Inspired Quill 2014) and my second Another Rebecca (due out with Inspired Quill 2015) are both around this age. You've made me want to read both the novels you've reviewed.

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Annecdotist
31/10/2014 09:48:59 am

Glad the reviews have enticed you, Tracey. Adolescence is such an interesting subject for fiction: so much potential, so much that could go wrong. You've certainly tackled the troubled teenager in The Last Time We Saw Marion.
I'm wondering if you've got your cover yet for Another Rebecca as I believe mine is next in the queue ;)

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geoff link
31/10/2014 05:07:28 am

has ever your reviews are beautifully constructed. And reading Tracey is interesting too; I maintain I'm 19 inside; people think that's the age I'd like to go back to (mostly if asked they plump for something later, when they were more worldly wise) but this isn't something of a choice, it's just how it feels - a way of viewing things, the sense of how the 19 year old me would react. I wonder if all of us have such a clock, dictating a sense of us?
For me it is the 1970s settings that appeal rather than adolescent tales. As you know, Dead Flies is set then (and my protagonist is 19). The first, being set in England, resonates more with me.
And your pointing about adolescence being a time for letting go and moving on for some but trying to capture something missing for others is very interesting. I was strongly in the former camp; I couldn't wait to get away from the suffocation I felt from small town Hampshire. One reason why I'll never live in the countryside I suspect. Once I'd found a city, the buzz, the anonymity if you wanted it, I knew I'd never willing leave.

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Annecdotist
31/10/2014 09:56:52 am

That's an interesting question, Geoff, and I'm kind of surprised that both you and Tracey are sure of the specific age of the adolescent who lives inside you. I'm less sure; I'd like to think I've left it behind – or maybe writing Diana's story is part of that process (although get this everybody – she isn't me!).
Well I think the healthy thing is being able to separate from childhood but what I was trying to say was that sometimes that's complicated when you're still waiting for the childhood you should have had.
BTW, The Virgins is set in New Hampshire – wonder if there is a subtle connection to the old Hampshire you grew up in.

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Charli Mills
31/10/2014 05:18:12 pm

Another great set of book reviews! Troubled teens are not my area of interest, but it is certainly universal and open to a variety of topics and characters. I think they are good subjects to offer reflection later in life. I like that idea in This Beautiful you save it as interconnected short stories. I'm fascinated by the idea of linking scenes to tell a story, far from mastering it. I'm still too comfortable being a story-teller.

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Annecdotist
1/11/2014 06:38:11 am

Thanks, Charli. I think it's a hard one to pull off. Even I, not exactly a fan of the quest novel, got a little lost looking for the arrows to show where we were going.

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Sarah link
1/11/2014 09:21:33 am

Love this, Anne. These both sound fascinating. Your reviews are always insightful, thought-provoking, and beautifully written.

I'm going to look these two up. (I'm kind of a sucker for this subject...)

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Annecdotist
1/11/2014 10:52:59 am

Glad I've managed to entice you, Sarah. And I'm assuming you'll get the cultural references in This Beautiful – unless they're time-specific.

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Sarah link
2/11/2014 06:37:56 am

Yes, I'll probably get the cultural references. But, even if they're time-specific, there's a good chance I'll get them anyway. I wasn't a teen in the 70s, but I was around. ;-)

Annecdotist
2/11/2014 08:14:29 am

As an embryo, perhaps, oh youthful person!




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